Review Detail of Rookni in Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)
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I like this story very much, although with the current pace and the speed of development of mc op ability and pokemon, I don't see how the story can continue above 100 chapters without getting dull, his team grows to fast is my point. Maybe he will pull a xianxia trick and travel to an alternative dimension with average stronger pokemon to fight, but at that point, it will be harder to keep the story interesting, in my opinion.
Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)
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The fast development of his team is by design but I agree I can slow it down a little bit, although it has been 100k words already and Firefly has still not evolved into Charizard. I don't want to spoil things but I have a "solution" that is not a xianxia trick to the situation, the only tip I can offer is that it's related to Leaf and will make journeying to other regions in the future something possible. I mean, every pokemon fic seems to revolve only around a single region, the journey starts with the first pokemon and ends with a cataclysmic showdown against a legendary or against one of the terrorist organizations. I want to eventually have Emmet go against everything Ash did (with some small exceptions), so the story has to allow him to have a way to travel through the world and beat each League while tackling the issues of the regions in a timely fashion. The fast growth is necessary, otherwise him facing Mewtwo and standing his ground will be even more ludicrous.