Review Detail of Darkest_Sage in republished*****

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Hey :) I spent a lot of time polishing the prose and making sure there weren't any grammar mistakes, so you know it's going to be a smooth read. And the characters? They're so real you'll feel like you know them personally. I made sure to give them each their own unique quirks and personalities, so you'll be invested in their lives from the first chapter. The plot is tightly woven and full of twists and turns that feel natural and earned. I wanted to keep you guessing, but I didn't want anything to feel contrived. I think I struck the perfect balance between unpredictability and inevitability. Overall, I'm really proud of it, and I think you're going to love it. If you're looking for a well-written story that will keep you engaged from beginning to end, this is it!




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Your novel is a word by word copy of another one called Path of Ruin [Star Wars SI]. Are you perhaps the same author? As far as I know this story is already complete and even has a sequel.

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