Review Detail of Huevo_Izquierdo in Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)
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The last chapters very disappointing it seems that the MC does not move forward if he does not go backwards, he acts worse and worse, the only way for him to change his attitude is to have his pokémon murdered because he deserves it, nor does Ash act like that in that way[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)
Basso2142
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I get your point and will take it in consideration moving forward. Him being a 15 year old with a sheltered life made him oblivious to a lot of things, I will focus more on putting him in situations that will make him mature faster, but it is hard to capture how people mature with words. All I can do is promise to improve this aspect. Hope you stick around enough to see the results :)
Basso2142:I get your point and will take it in consideration moving forward. Him being a 15 year old with a sheltered life made him oblivious to a lot of things, I will focus more on putting him in situations that will make him mature faster, but it is hard to capture how people mature with words. All I can do is promise to improve this aspect. Hope you stick around enough to see the results :)
