Author loves angst. Too many loop holes. And situations get forced to "push" mc to brink of death and despair. Its unnatural and unrealistic.Its irritating. All this EM power and metaknowledge but messing up still.
Basso2142
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I'm not a fan of angst but I get your point, I will strive to improve in this aspect and maybe this fic will eventually be something you like :)