The Devil of Yuragi-sou

The MC, despite being OP, doesn't like conflicts, and will only show his power once in awhile.' Also mc apparently being a 'great demon satan' who almost conquered the world; Ente Isla. Wtf???

To start off the review, . I would like to say, I criticize the author sometimes in the comments, it's mostly bias from myself. But, one should know, you cannot expect to have everything in a single work. And even when I say that, It doesn't make this work any less amazing. When you read the story, you will find some details you will not like, or it wasn't how you assumed it to be. For an example, there were some of us against the harem, and we voiced it, but the author has his own plan. And we respect that, as he calmed us down with his own explanations. So, if you don't have patience to read the A/N, then you will have trouble with the story. As for author and story evaluation: 1.Wrtiting Quality: Like I said writing quality, decent, good grammar, no repetition and details are well-kept, up to the end of volume 1. 2. Updates: The updates are quite fast. But, I do know, it might just be because, the author had more free time, and he too insisted he will do his best to update daily, but life and school catches up, so keep that in mind. And my deepest respect to you author, updating so frequently while writing on a phone. Wheew! I know I can't do that. 3. S. Developement: Story developement is subjective! Not everyone likes all the details that the author thought up. You might like one thing from the meshups while abhore the other. But the mix of the elements have been good so far and I assure you the quality. 4. Character Design. For this I have some criticism. Author did create an OC who was reincarnated as Maou from Hataraku, But author has used the excuse of him being Maou and having his personality over his own. And there are some dissatisfaction about this in the comments, where I my self have thrown some jabs xDD, but he tried to explain his PoV and I can respect that. But hope you decide soon if it's the OC's personality or Maou's personality which is dominant. Other than that the OC at the start felt quite nice for a Demon king but at the end of the Volume 1 it was kinda irritating as his whole personality seemed to shift. A person who didn't bat an eye to sever a whole continent wud let some cat chick off when it tried to kidnap his daughter sheeh. Greater Good dumbledork shit. 5. The world is a meshup of different animes, where the main setting is in the world of Yuuragi sou. . . For a finishing peech, Like I said the story is quite good. You will not find everything going your way. The story belongs the author after all. And if he isn't having fun writing then, it will reflect on when we read. So hope everyone gives this one a read and support the author best you can. Bless you all Whoever read this far.

It's a really good slice of life story with a bit of action. I really liked it, it is a nice change after reading countless MCs with the "See God, slay God, see devil, slay devil" or the "Anh? You dare touch even a single microbe of my loved one? I'll make you die a horrible death! 'proceeds to kill a few hundred unrelated people' " or " You have antagonized me, even if there's a bigger picture to why you do so, I'll still kill you and deal with the consequences later" kind of of mentality. I exaggerated a bit of the examples but you get what I mean. The MC of the fic though loves peace and silence, he is not one to take a beating without doing anything back or not act if something happens to his closed ones just cause he doesn't want conflict. He is calculative, sees the bigger picture and knows when to back out if needed. He is also OP so that's a plus. Overall, the fic is a good read and I recommend you to try it. Just don't expect MC to be killing left and right cause of the smallest reasons. This is a slice of life fic after all. I'm gonna rant a little bit down here but what baffles me the most is why a lot of people felt disappointed with the conclusion of the fight with the cat lady or the whole fic in fact. The reason and explanation is there in the chapter why it ended the way it ended and this is a fuckin slice of life for **** sake. If this is a wuxia novel then I get why it would be disappointing but come on, it is already written in the synopsis what kind of novel this is going to be. *sigh* I'm guessing people don't get what the meaning of 'slice of life' really is. Anyway author, take criticism with a pinch of salt, change if you feels they are correct, if not continue the way you are. Don't just focus on the negative and continue just being you. This is your story after all.

I really liked the idea and the story, The story has a lot of potential, I hope it continues, this story is definitely going to my library [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Ok then...let's check- OP MC ? Check. Handsome MC ? Check. OP MC but actually uses his brain ? Check. Cool MC ? Check. Smart MC(i know but i'll write this again) ? Check. Not simp MC ? Check. Check. MC that doesn't start blushing when a girl says 'hi' ? F**K YEAH!! Final result ? PERFECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!

Right , a realistic review now. Writing quality- not too many glaring mistakes in the writing, many spelling mistakes are made often and the lack of thrilling vocabulary to grip readers in. All in all writing-wise mediocre. There's no subtle meaning to his sentences just plain old blanket statements. Updates-Frequent Story Development- Well it's pretty fucking awful, there's no definitive objective to stride to, the world premise is that it's a vague crossover multiverse. The author adds worlds randomly and I cant see this boding well for the story. The author says he has a plan but like, really?. So to summarise: MC runs over "truck-kun" , gets powers from ROB. Finds an orb of life energy who he has no relation to whatsoever at all, becomes a doting father almost immediately. MC's shown to be rather cunning too but like ,really? I digress. Character Design- Flat, 0 dimensional characters that exist for the mc. The story revolves entirely around the MC with no personification for other characters. There's comedy if you can call it that, it's all just shitty jokes that the MC says with a redditor's shit-eating grin. There's no chemistry between any of the characters except for some intensely forced humor hamfisted into the story. World Background- I'd rate 3 if possible, The worlds are mixed together like circus freak's conjoint twins with no cohesive anchor between them Whilst that's not so bad, the fact that it's just unexplained and with no line of thought behind it. It's just mediocre ya know@ There we go TL;DR dogg shit no read please, thanks

hah I wanted to ask if there was any romance in this story, because I was really annoyed with the ending of my heart, because Emilia wasn't chosen by Maou.

one of the good and best, I read so far in webnovel. thanks for the chapter, and hope you update more.ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah. ah ah.

The only thing I can say is that MC should also display or balance his personality as a demon king and a human. Demon king in a sense that he don't give a **** to those who harmed him or attacked him first and give appropriate punishments if he doesn't want to kill and as a human who he was in his previous life.

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I just finished the 2nd volume of this fanfic or so you called. Honestly, I only watch the anime of Hataraku so I'll be putting the review here now cause' I will be a stranger in the next chapter I read, even tho I read many spoilers in some chapters.

I didn't know what to expect when starting this fic but now I am hooked. Slice of life novels with mixed anime are not rare but most of them are trash. This novel gives the same vibe as A father's duty, a fic that is similar to this. I like all the anime author combined and it flows smoothly with none of the anime contradicting each other. Characters are portrayed well enough and Mc is not a horndog which is a huge plus. Updates are fast and world background is good. Overall a sol fic which is top tier.

I accidentally close my review and im too lazy to rewrite it. Ill just say that its so good and the prologue is enough to get me hooked. Soo... yah👍🏻👍🏻

It's been a while since I last saw a Yuragi sou fanfic that's not about futanari and Devil is a part-timer is one of my all-time fav isekai for that I'll give you a 5 star rating

love it, hopefully you will finish it as it's have such interesting concept of it. have catch up to the newest chapter and so far is good, thank you for making this (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤

Its a good fanfic with a good balance. The only problem is that fight not really exciting. Mc is powerful from the start and it gets boring with this. You can read it for slice of life but not for fights. Mc is too powerful for reader enjoy fights. He after getting this much power not excited a bit and after seeing hot nonko from yuragi inn not excited either. I am not saying you to act like a teenage but even normal man show some reaction. Mc is a bit too boring in that sense. He is powerful, too mature like an old man and even had a daughter. Actually he has nothing to do in this supernatural world. Normal world enough for him too live. He says it too i dont want to fight just raising my daughter is enough. All in all its a good series for slice of life but if you are looking a fighting series with a good ol' harem genre its not satisfying enough. As for romance we didnt see it as of chap. 35 so i dont know if it will be satisfy readers.

great fanfiction Is interesting to read author don't discourage because people don't like the mc or dislike harem. ................... ........

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I am a sucker for all things cute. This includes Alice. I also like weird stuff. This includes... well, everything else in this novel, I guess. For real though, the pacing is slow, it's a slice of life with an overwhelmingly OP MC who actually uses his brain from time to time which is a real Plus for me, and we get diabetes inducing interaction between father and daughter. Absolutely worth the read for everyone who likes those kinda stories. Good job author and I really hope you keep having fun while writing. Creation is such a beautiful thing, and it should never feel like a chore! Cheers fellow and future readers!