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Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv43yr
2021-01-11 17:52

The MC, despite being OP, doesn't like conflicts, and will only show his power once in awhile.' Also mc apparently being a 'great demon satan' who almost conquered the world; Ente Isla. Wtf???

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PridefulRoyalty
PridefulRoyaltyAuthor

Umm, have you read Hataraku? Satan isn't that kind of demon lord okay, he was kind, and caring, and curious about humans and wanted to learn more about humanity, and alex(the mc) a normal human, you can't expect a normal human to suddenly act like a demon lord you know, also this is a slice of life, its in the tag, you can't expect an evil demon lord in slice of life, but tnx for the review anyway, at least you did not give my book a 1 star

Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

'Evil demon lord'=Kind and caring.... Also, your novel isn't crap to deserve 1 star.

PridefulRoyalty:Umm, have you read Hataraku? Satan isn't that kind of demon lord okay, he was kind, and caring, and curious about humans and wanted to learn more about humanity, and alex(the mc) a normal human, you can't expect a normal human to suddenly act like a demon lord you know, also this is a slice of life, its in the tag, you can't expect an evil demon lord in slice of life, but tnx for the review anyway, at least you did not give my book a 1 star
PridefulRoyalty
PridefulRoyaltyAuthor

no, satan isn't evil at all, he was called demon king because he united the demon world and brought peace to the wartorn demon world, but due to peace, the demonic force(the energy of demons used to survive) that came from the fear and despair brought by war suddenly came to stop, therefore cutting the demons path to survival. so satan decided to go to ente isla and create a situation where the humans will fear them, so that they can survive. however, the generals and demons misunderstood him and pretty much massacred their way to ente isla. yeah, even though he isn't completely good, he was far from evil either. as i stated in my previous comment, satan was fascinated and curious about humans due to the stories told by an angel that saved him, so he wanted to learn more about "humanity"

Uncle_Sheogorath:'Evil demon lord'=Kind and caring.... Also, your novel isn't crap to deserve 1 star.
Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

I know. Still sounds silly tho. 'EVIL' demon=good.

PridefulRoyalty:no, satan isn't evil at all, he was called demon king because he united the demon world and brought peace to the wartorn demon world, but due to peace, the demonic force(the energy of demons used to survive) that came from the fear and despair brought by war suddenly came to stop, therefore cutting the demons path to survival. so satan decided to go to ente isla and create a situation where the humans will fear them, so that they can survive. however, the generals and demons misunderstood him and pretty much massacred their way to ente isla. yeah, even though he isn't completely good, he was far from evil either. as i stated in my previous comment, satan was fascinated and curious about humans due to the stories told by an angel that saved him, so he wanted to learn more about "humanity"
Dioseethis
DioseethisLv6

It's base on the devil is a part timer which is an anime and probably the first isekai. It's a great anime but sadly it only has 1 season. If you're still confuse or think it's weird just watch the anime.

Uncle_Sheogorath:I know. Still sounds silly tho. 'EVIL' demon=good.
Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

I did watch the anime. It's a pathetic demon who gets teleported to earth and somehow looks like a young Japanese guy and works in KFC.

Dioseethis:It's base on the devil is a part timer which is an anime and probably the first isekai. It's a great anime but sadly it only has 1 season. If you're still confuse or think it's weird just watch the anime.
Dioseethis
DioseethisLv6

By this comment I could safely say that you did not watch the anime or finish it.

Uncle_Sheogorath:I did watch the anime. It's a pathetic demon who gets teleported to earth and somehow looks like a young Japanese guy and works in KFC.
noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv14

If you watch hataraku maou-sama you’ll understand why it happen and wont even have this review. I mean, you should have expect satan would be like that. It seems to me that your basing a different satan than the one thats on ‘hataraku maou-sama’.

Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

No. My point being is that calling mc satan in the first place is silly. He is no satan, he is nothing more than a typical Japanese pacifist.

noobageddon_:If you watch hataraku maou-sama you’ll understand why it happen and wont even have this review. I mean, you should have expect satan would be like that. It seems to me that your basing a different satan than the one thats on ‘hataraku maou-sama’.
Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

Yes I did watch it long time ago. hataraku maou-sam -demon part-timer thing anime I did watch, he works in fast food kfc type place.

Dioseethis:By this comment I could safely say that you did not watch the anime or finish it.
Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4

Bro, the Author explained why he's called that. Is that really the only criticism you have? Because it doesn't make any sense.

Uncle_Sheogorath:No. My point being is that calling mc satan in the first place is silly. He is no satan, he is nothing more than a typical Japanese pacifist.
Lize
LizeLv13

than you are idiot.. this is fanfic based on hataraki maou sama.. the original satan in hataraku maou sama is way more weak than alex.. your complain should go to the original story.. not this.. if your complain is about how satan not act like 'satan'.. 😅😅😅

Uncle_Sheogorath:Yes I did watch it long time ago. hataraku maou-sam -demon part-timer thing anime I did watch, he works in fast food kfc type place.
ScrambledEgg
ScrambledEggLv3

you have to think more before you criticism someone if your topic just about the MC "name" 1. This is a story so author have the full freedom to naming their chara. 2. Sometimes "Name" or "Second Name" doesn't represent their true nature. ex: God Usop (i can't see God from him), Demon Child Robin (i think she is more like succubus), Demon Lord Slime Rimuru (if shion didn't die, i think he will not become demon lord, but even after become Demon Lord he didn't act like demon he is still slime), Hiruzen Sarutobi (he didn't act like monkey) 3. Usually in japanese fantasy story the king of demon always get the title "Demon Lord/King" without thinking about their personalities. Dungeon master too usually get that title. Even some "Heroes" didn't act like hero you know. 4. And iabout "Satan" (represent of Rage in 7 sins) i think it's the most common name that usually we hear if someone tell about Demon. leviatan(use for legendary sea serpent), lucifer(angel/fallen angel), and about belphegor or asmodeus? i think it's rare to mention it. well if someone say "Satan" we all knew it's a "demon"

Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

You got a point.

ScrambledEgg:you have to think more before you criticism someone if your topic just about the MC "name" 1. This is a story so author have the full freedom to naming their chara. 2. Sometimes "Name" or "Second Name" doesn't represent their true nature. ex: God Usop (i can't see God from him), Demon Child Robin (i think she is more like succubus), Demon Lord Slime Rimuru (if shion didn't die, i think he will not become demon lord, but even after become Demon Lord he didn't act like demon he is still slime), Hiruzen Sarutobi (he didn't act like monkey) 3. Usually in japanese fantasy story the king of demon always get the title "Demon Lord/King" without thinking about their personalities. Dungeon master too usually get that title. Even some "Heroes" didn't act like hero you know. 4. And iabout "Satan" (represent of Rage in 7 sins) i think it's the most common name that usually we hear if someone tell about Demon. leviatan(use for legendary sea serpent), lucifer(angel/fallen angel), and about belphegor or asmodeus? i think it's rare to mention it. well if someone say "Satan" we all knew it's a "demon"
Gingai
GingaiLv4

you are one fucking dumb idiot

Uncle_Sheogorath:Yes I did watch it long time ago. hataraku maou-sam -demon part-timer thing anime I did watch, he works in fast food kfc type place.
Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

Thanks for an insult mongrel. My advice is to wash, before speaking to humans. Your non-human animal ape smell is repugnant and you wouldn't want to be terminated for being a freak of nature who can speak.

Gingai:you are one fucking dumb idiot
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NewLeaf
NewLeafLv11

wth is this human quarel all about... carry on your day dude

Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

There is no quarrel. Just chatter.

NewLeaf:wth is this human quarel all about... carry on your day dude
PridefulRoyalty
PridefulRoyaltyAuthor

yeah, this is just a normal conversation in webnovel

Uncle_Sheogorath:There is no quarrel. Just chatter.
Asc3ns10n
Asc3ns10nLv4

is this a the devils a part timer fanfic

PridefulRoyalty:yeah, this is just a normal conversation in webnovel
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