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Aldunhokoron
AldunhokoronLv114yr
2021-01-13 16:17

It's a really good slice of life story with a bit of action. I really liked it, it is a nice change after reading countless MCs with the "See God, slay God, see devil, slay devil" or the "Anh? You dare touch even a single microbe of my loved one? I'll make you die a horrible death! 'proceeds to kill a few hundred unrelated people' " or " You have antagonized me, even if there's a bigger picture to why you do so, I'll still kill you and deal with the consequences later" kind of of mentality. I exaggerated a bit of the examples but you get what I mean. The MC of the fic though loves peace and silence, he is not one to take a beating without doing anything back or not act if something happens to his closed ones just cause he doesn't want conflict. He is calculative, sees the bigger picture and knows when to back out if needed. He is also OP so that's a plus. Overall, the fic is a good read and I recommend you to try it. Just don't expect MC to be killing left and right cause of the smallest reasons. This is a slice of life fic after all. I'm gonna rant a little bit down here but what baffles me the most is why a lot of people felt disappointed with the conclusion of the fight with the cat lady or the whole fic in fact. The reason and explanation is there in the chapter why it ended the way it ended and this is a fuckin slice of life for **** sake. If this is a wuxia novel then I get why it would be disappointing but come on, it is already written in the synopsis what kind of novel this is going to be. *sigh* I'm guessing people don't get what the meaning of 'slice of life' really is. Anyway author, take criticism with a pinch of salt, change if you feels they are correct, if not continue the way you are. Don't just focus on the negative and continue just being you. This is your story after all.

The Devil of Yuragi-sou

PridefulRoyalty
4.8
154 Chs

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PeterGriffith
PeterGriffithLv4

I get what you mean by Some people not getting what the Slice of life means, Maybe they were thinking that it Slice the life of people in half...Who knows really.

4yr
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jahmarian_thomas
jahmarian_thomasLv12

please don't say *sigh* pepeve

4yr
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Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

The MC, despite being OP, doesn't like conflicts, and will only show his power once in awhile.' Also mc apparently being a 'great demon satan' who almost conquered the world; Ente Isla. Wtf???

4yr

LuminouShadow
LuminouShadowLv4

To start off the review, . I would like to say, I criticize the author sometimes in the comments, it's mostly bias from myself. But, one should know, you cannot expect to have everything in a single work. And even when I say that, It doesn't make this work any less amazing. When you read the story, you will find some details you will not like, or it wasn't how you assumed it to be. For an example, there were some of us against the harem, and we voiced it, but the author has his own plan. And we respect that, as he calmed us down with his own explanations. So, if you don't have patience to read the A/N, then you will have trouble with the story. As for author and story evaluation: 1.Wrtiting Quality: Like I said writing quality, decent, good grammar, no repetition and details are well-kept, up to the end of volume 1. 2. Updates: The updates are quite fast. But, I do know, it might just be because, the author had more free time, and he too insisted he will do his best to update daily, but life and school catches up, so keep that in mind. And my deepest respect to you author, updating so frequently while writing on a phone. Wheew! I know I can't do that. 3. S. Developement: Story developement is subjective! Not everyone likes all the details that the author thought up. You might like one thing from the meshups while abhore the other. But the mix of the elements have been good so far and I assure you the quality. 4. Character Design. For this I have some criticism. Author did create an OC who was reincarnated as Maou from Hataraku, But author has used the excuse of him being Maou and having his personality over his own. And there are some dissatisfaction about this in the comments, where I my self have thrown some jabs xDD, but he tried to explain his PoV and I can respect that. But hope you decide soon if it's the OC's personality or Maou's personality which is dominant. Other than that the OC at the start felt quite nice for a Demon king but at the end of the Volume 1 it was kinda irritating as his whole personality seemed to shift. A person who didn't bat an eye to sever a whole continent wud let some cat chick off when it tried to kidnap his daughter sheeh. Greater Good dumbledork shit. 5. The world is a meshup of different animes, where the main setting is in the world of Yuuragi sou. . . For a finishing peech, Like I said the story is quite good. You will not find everything going your way. The story belongs the author after all. And if he isn't having fun writing then, it will reflect on when we read. So hope everyone gives this one a read and support the author best you can. Bless you all Whoever read this far.

4yr
INVADER_WEST
INVADER_WESTLv3

I really liked the idea and the story, The story has a lot of potential, I hope it continues, this story is definitely going to my library [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

4yr
Lucifer_sama
Lucifer_samaLv3

Ok then...let's check- OP MC ? Check. Handsome MC ? Check. OP MC but actually uses his brain ? Check. Cool MC ? Check. Smart MC(i know but i'll write this again) ? Check. Not simp MC ? Check. Check. MC that doesn't start blushing when a girl says 'hi' ? F**K YEAH!! Final result ? PERFECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!

4yr
Slyyle
SlyyleLv2

Right , a realistic review now. Writing quality- not too many glaring mistakes in the writing, many spelling mistakes are made often and the lack of thrilling vocabulary to grip readers in. All in all writing-wise mediocre. There's no subtle meaning to his sentences just plain old blanket statements. Updates-Frequent Story Development- Well it's pretty fucking awful, there's no definitive objective to stride to, the world premise is that it's a vague crossover multiverse. The author adds worlds randomly and I cant see this boding well for the story. The author says he has a plan but like, really?. So to summarise: MC runs over "truck-kun" , gets powers from ROB. Finds an orb of life energy who he has no relation to whatsoever at all, becomes a doting father almost immediately. MC's shown to be rather cunning too but like ,really? I digress. Character Design- Flat, 0 dimensional characters that exist for the mc. The story revolves entirely around the MC with no personification for other characters. There's comedy if you can call it that, it's all just shitty jokes that the MC says with a redditor's shit-eating grin. There's no chemistry between any of the characters except for some intensely forced humor hamfisted into the story. World Background- I'd rate 3 if possible, The worlds are mixed together like circus freak's conjoint twins with no cohesive anchor between them Whilst that's not so bad, the fact that it's just unexplained and with no line of thought behind it. It's just mediocre ya know@ There we go TL;DR dogg shit no read please, thanks

4yr
kevin_saputra
kevin_saputraLv3

hah I wanted to ask if there was any romance in this story, because I was really annoyed with the ending of my heart, because Emilia wasn't chosen by Maou.

4yr
Dao_of_Thighs
Dao_of_ThighsLv3

one of the good and best, I read so far in webnovel. thanks for the chapter, and hope you update more.ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah. ah ah.

4yr
Dr_Chad
Dr_ChadLv13

The only thing I can say is that MC should also display or balance his personality as a demon king and a human. Demon king in a sense that he don't give a **** to those who harmed him or attacked him first and give appropriate punishments if he doesn't want to kill and as a human who he was in his previous life.

4yr
NoizJr
NoizJrLv5

I need moar chaptaaaah!!... I need moar chaptaaaah!!... I need moar chaptaaaah!!... I need moar chaptaaaah!!... I need moar chaptaaaah!!... I need moar chaptaaaah!!... I need moar chaptaaaah!!... I need moar chaptaaaah!!...

4yr
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