Klazy_Labbit

ok I think a mankey really suits him lol and maybe an electrode too

Nothing much to say but I feel Mc is way too op for this world and while being op can make things interesting,that’s not the case here. It’s just hard to take things seriously when my can casually resurrect people by ch 2 and his only limit is his imagination.

Forced plot device….He can just kind control her and take the book or just do anything he wants.

Bruh he is so op though so there’s literally no threat to him in this world

hmm I think scars on the body are fine but the ones on his face can go.

As If Chinese authors could write this well…..

Finally a novel where the protagonist has the balls to reject someone

social credits up. ....

Your writing is fine but do try to maintain consistent character development as mc doesn't behave logically. Also the whole dungeon thing in gamer fics kills any tension and moreover this is a low tier world so I would rather the dungeon be less frequent....

him making mistakes is not an issue but with how he chose intelligence over charisma, it should mean more and be more effective than its current portrayal. With how fast he can think, the 'I forgot to' excuse feels forced.