HP: The Otherworlder

First! Well, at least first to give myself a powerstone... As mentioned in CH1 author comments, my stability of updates will be zero.... I will upload when I want, how much I want. So please, if you do leave a review, I would appreciate commentary on all other aspects of the story, as I fully admit that I will always be behind in this one. Thanks :)

Give it a shot, you won't regret it. It's a different premise to most of the stuff on webnovel, and the writing style at least tells me the author's first language is English.

Author put MC in Hufflepuff, that should be enough to realize this story is not for you. I mean... who would EVER want to be in Hufflepuff?? I bet the author is a cuck or something.

While the writing Quality is better than nearly anything I have read on Webnovel, the Story itself, especially the Mc, is probably one of the worst. First of all, I think the only reason you put a picture of Tom Riddle JR in there and let him be " transmigrated" as little Voldi is to get more Viewers because there are no, like 0% of similarities between the Mc and him. You might as well put an OC in this. Furthermore, this seems like an average Op, cringe-comedy, Mary Sue( I know, female version of the word, but I forgot the male version) FF. In the beginning, I could understand him trying to be friendly. I mean, little Voldi was the most social person in Hogwarts to make" friends " or to seem reliable. But the further we go into the Story, the more disappointed I become. Considering that the only thing you have to concentrate on is your Story and not the World Building, your grammar, character, or anything else that is already there, this disappointment only grows. First of all...Hufflepuff, seriously. This is like him screaming out loud in Voldemort's face " I am not your younger version" because Voldemort could get in any, literally any House other than Hufflepuff, the House of Loyalty, and leftovers. All in all, this is not a matter of personal preferences, but a case of " This Story is a disappointment for all those that expected something different"

I've read a lot of fanfics of HP and some really good ones id say but this has got to be the best start to an HP story I've read. From the original unique origin, to his personality, and the house he's under. There is a balance of power seeking and social interaction that many other fanfics don't seem to achieve and its impressive. The trio havent been involved but doesn't seem to be against interacting with them which I love. he needs to be a part of the plot in the end so he should interact with them eventually. This story had everything you'd want, and to top it off, and most importantly, I don't think the author is scared to deviate from the plot, no use writing a story if the same events happen. overall a great start and already ranked as one of my favorites.

The canon divergent world and intense oressure on MC to disguise himself from the scrutiny of both Voldilocks (who is written/characterised so well) and dumbeldore is AMAZING. the rituals are also super cool and fit the HP world lore. Author, i think this is an incredible work of writing that completely distances itself from the OG HP plot. you are using the world and some characters for your own story which is a good fanfic. I am concerned it's so low in ranking compared to what it should be though. I think it's because of severus snape being the first words in the synopis. I skipped over it multiple times because i thought it was a snape fanfic when it is so much better. Anyway, i just feel it's BS this isn't top of fanfic power ranking with the other good HP fanfic currently active.

The summary is kind of confusing i think it should be rewritten but other than that it's a really good book it's has a unique flavor that people look for after reading too many cliche Harry Potter fanfics

Grammar : 100% perfect👌🏾. Diction : Outstandingly outstanding👏🏾. Writing Quality : Excellent 👌🏾👏🏾. The writer is intelligent and the writing quality leaves nothing to be desired. So far this is the best work I've read in this platform, far ahead of others. Best of all, since the writer seems to be highly intelligent and properly educated, I would wager that this is not a Harem!!!

Very good, original, no evident grammar mistake but i can't really judge as English is my third language

An actually good HP fanfiction on Webnovel? I must be hallucinating. If I had to criticize something it's how lucky the MC ends up being, IE, in the forbidden forest. Dude should've died multiple times over to the manticore, and someone definitely should've noticed his rituals. I enjoyed it though, so I guess it's something of a moot point.

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first fanfic i rate full star 5/5, the story, idea, background and character.. what more is the detail wow im amaze reading this story.. can author tell me the inspiration? u more genius than edmund for that..

Is not a bad story, and if you read it will probably enjoy it but for me is very boring...I have enjoy worse stories with worst writing quality and worst story development much more that this one.... I really found it boring as heck!

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One of the greatest thing about this fanfic is that the characters feel real unlike many other fic. Also, the grammar is really which is a big plus for me.

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It's genuinely good. Far above the average rabble of HP fanfics that can be found on this site, the English is probably better than mine so I have no complaints, the premise of the story is (as far as I know) original and interesting and the execution is delightful and easy to read. If you're reading this trying to decide whether or not to start reading, don't waste time, start now, you won't regret it.

LOVE IT!!!!

Good stuff. Interesting premise. Want more words to read. Gimme. ....................................................................

Only read the first 2 chps. From what I could gather, the decent writing quality. 5 stars because I loved the idea, I haven't seen something like this done before, that says a lot with the number HP fanfictions around. I hope this one at least gets it's deserved conclusion. Anyways, I suggest the author to advertise his work on the many available HP fanfiction discords if he wants to get more readers. Or on forums.darklordpotter.net if he is feeling particularly brave.