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BryndenRivers6dCommentedcringe and gay
When you start playing hide-and-seek with the undead, can you imagine that one day the undead will also play hide-and-seek with you?- BryndenRivers6dCommentedCh 16 16. I'm Batman
- BryndenRivers12dCommentedCh 16 16. I'm Batman
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Nearly every single invention was stolen and mass produced by those richer than the inventor.
Pamela was surprised by the level of knowledge that Morty showcased having answered every question and even managed to correct a common misconception about history at how Thomas Jefferson is simply a copy cut of his countless inventions and didn't credit the research he used. - BryndenRivers14dCommented
cause author likes autistic weak mc apparently lol
"Yeah, why didn't you defend yourself?" frustrated, Kat said. - BryndenRivers14dCommentedCh 78 Chapter 69
- BryndenRivers14dCommentedCh 74 Chapter 65 edited
- BryndenRivers15dCommented
You should have... half of it was pointless drivel that you just kept repeating in different ways...
I thought about removing a huge part of this chapter and just skipping to the fight more than once while writing it but it just seemed wrong and I felt that I had to include this, especially Levi's inner struggle. - BryndenRivers17dCommented
That's it? Very very very underwhelming and it'll be complete pointless when he's an actual adult who can do things. I see zero point in this story so far.
One thing I didn't mention, however, is my little cheat that came with transmigration. It wasn't a system, but the very next best thing - regardless of device, I could access the internet in its 2020 state. - BryndenRivers17dPosted
Started off fine but the author turned the pussy nice prince into a warrior cunt and turned the warrior nice prince into a pussy cunt. It's quite interesting how one can fuck up a story so quickly and completely change the personality of the characters so drastically and still believe its a good story or even makes sense. The genius and future knight MC turns into a bumbling idiot that can't even defeat a household guard and leaves evidence at crime scenes cause he's a retard now. I genuinely don't think the author even reads or comprehends the story they've writen. Probably the long breaks they take and they forget how the characters THEY CREATED work...
- BryndenRivers17dCommented
So why does he lean into the rumors of being a bastard??? You told us he only nice with Aerys to get into his good graces so why does he SCREAM that he has Lannister blood every time he dresses up? It's a stupid decision in this already subpar novel. That along with the behavioral issues shows you don't really know how to craft a story that makes sense whatsoever.
All of us Targaryens stood together, Mother holding little Viserys wrapped in a red and black blanket, while Father, Rhaegar, Daeron, and wore the colors of House Targaryen - black and red, except for me standing out in gold and white attire. - BryndenRivers20dCommentedCh 22 News Travels
- BryndenRivers20dCommented
I'm reading this for pure enjoyment and I have no problems with it... keep doing what you're doing!
[A/N: Theres been some criticism about the wish power and the wishes he makes. I didn't put deep thought into the power other than trying to keep the wishes as minor wishes. As for the wishes themselves I just had him make them on my whims to help move the story. This is just for my own enjoyment. Enjoy it for what it is if you can, and sorry for any mistakes. Thanks for reading. - BryndenRivers20dReplied to Pizirxi
Sorry could you take the author's dick out of your mouth for 1 minute? I couldn't quite grasp what you said.
This chapter has been deleted. - BryndenRivers22dPosted
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Thank god
Our time in the world of Remnant has come to an end.