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Well I enjoy your story a lot But we need bigger chapters , for 1 chapter a week I think they are small!! Anyways hope the pace get better

How can a re write be worst so bad ?! The personality of Mc is so cripy and make zero sense Anyways

Yea turned messy trash Last 5-6 chapters unreadable And the whole one piece powers make zero sense Imagine having chakra and going for devil fruits Time to drop

What a disappointment! The author delwte half the lore about the dragons Then we have a Mc full of self misery And total idiot! He could live his life free explore his powers and the world But no He spy Eaton and his cousins for years Waste time and crying why he has no rider My god what a trash plot

So.. is really so hard to go back and edit the cousin to brother?? Are you so lazy or is this a stolen story copy paste ?

Nah is the same I just fast skip the chapter 15 chapters in the past with no reason Wow really

Let’s be real.. you start the story good but the whole marriage, romance,trying to help the little poor girl .. is not so good! You had a Mc planning wars and finding spies and secrets but now playing with little girls and wasting chapters ! Second really now harem?? You don’t have it with the romance aspect , better stay is your strong qualities I will give it 1-2 chapters more But if it gonna be like that A story about bad romance and harem is not for me

No hate but I just fast skips the chapters and hope all these back story end !!!

Is the story dropped?

hope this games end fast this whole ark is boring as heck maybe is just me but i have stop reading this story until it ends this ark