[MHA: The Ice King]

this is a good story i don't agree with you about the steven universe is better then adventure time thing but that is not apart of the story that is just you'r wrong opinion

5 stars for that fantabulous custom art cover

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The writing quality is good, the stability of updates is currently more or less, it is not stable but it has a good number of chapters, however the author has already mentioned that there is no schedule and whether there will be 1 or 30 chapters depends on his wishes. The development of the story is weak, there is nothing much to mention other than the MC nerfs. The Ice King's power was nerfed with full use having a limited time and leaving the MC half crazy, the deadpool's regeneration power that the MC requested was clearly nerfed even more since after getting tired he doesn't regenerate his stamina. Where I left off he hadn't taken any damage so far so I don't know how quickly he can regenerate and if he uses energy to do so or is passive like Deadpool. The author put the MC in Deku's school, only for the MC to ignore Deku because if he didn't suffer he could change canon and not win One For All. Honestly, if it was supposed to be like that it was better not to put the MC in Deku's school . The character design is pretty bad because besides the nerfs, the MC is a 6'5 tall teenager with a beard. He would have been great in scenes like Jojo, Baki and Kengan Ashura but in BNH he is just weird. The MC is taller than Sato. In Crown's crazy mode the MC is extremely Cringe to the point of being difficult to read. I would be fine with the MC slowly progressing in power, but the Nerf of the crown prevents him from reaching the peak in his base state since several powers can only be used with the crown. The wordl background is BNHA, nothing to add. Overall it's a good fic if you just want to read about someone with Ice King's powers in BNHA, other than that it's a fic I wouldn't recommend.

I would like to thank you for the fascinating fanfic about My Hero Academia! Your unique idea fascinated me from the very beginning. However, I noticed some grammatical difficulties that might distract readers from the main story. I recommend that you pay attention to editing the text to make it even more enjoyable to read. The battle scenes could have been more detailed. Your fanfic has great potential, and improving your skills in describing battle moments could make it even more exciting. Don't forget that every writer goes through a process of improvement, and your work is certainly on the right track. I look forward to the next chapters and hope to see your talent develop!

interesting idea, but sadly there are so many grammar mistakes. Author really needs to prove read his chapters.

It is not bad. But it could be better. For example, he is just a toy of a cosmic god. For me, it would be much better if he were an anomaly, an error in the reincarnation system. So the gods Cosmics would be the protagonist's enemies.But that's just my opinion 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

it's good but writing quality could be better

Just started but don't care. This seems rlly interesting plz dont drop. I like the 2nd part of the quirk. The ROB is right ya need some spice in the quirk to make it more fun XD. Hope you keep up the good work!

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The concept is pretty cool and so far its been pretty funny. The MCs prett likeable a little robotic at times but still good so overall a stroy with lots of potential hope the author doesn’t drop

What can I say except your ,Thank you for this gold.

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I Find it funny would recommend read it now

Very good so far also take my 3 power stones

Yay finally some one is making an mha ice king And also it is good so far and not cringe good job

Honestly, if you expect quality or story, this work is not recommended. It's just a combination of clichés with the only difference being the Ice King's ability. It's really hard to read. I read up to chapter 8, and I don't know if it will improve later, but it's boring to read. If you want to take a risk, turn off your brain and try. Good luck. (PS: The only positive point is that there is no harem)

fun fic to read

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