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Bro is learning... Tsuna next chapter:
Bro, are you good, 5 mouths hiatus in every story are alive?You good?
so I can do a lot of killing and have bad karma, but the karma will not affect me that much it's just there
hmm.. a type of reincarnation?Well ok what I was confused about is that he showed being a tsundere , caring without telling, but not in a romantic way. in my perspective, this development seemed abrupt but all good.
Well, interesting story the mc is "op" from the beginning he just needs time to learn more about his skills and gets more op with magic and all that. Is there a harem?Is Frieren the FL?
Well, you pretty much said what's wrong with the story (not that it makes the story trash) to correct it. You should elaborate on interactions between characters ,now if you should rewrite or not ,the question is do you have the patience to delete entire chapter's and write it all over again?Because you would need to rewrite entire scenes like the encounter with shades and the creation of Chrystal etc.
No harem
yeah, and what did he do wrong?