Zodiac (DC)

will the MC absorb the power of the 12 talismans the same way jade did? so there would be no risk of the talismans being lost or destroyed and the MC's oni mask can summon the 9 shadow clans or only 1 of them?

Welcome Back 3 months MIA thou you might have given a reason and I just forgot it ¯⁠\⁠_⁠(⁠ツ⁠)⁠_⁠/⁠¯ anyway power explainion please the 12 zodiacs have a wide difference in powers based on where like in fairy tail their summoned spirts in strike the blood their familiars with unique abilities like eating space (I only know the last one due to a fanfic where mc got the 12 zodiacs from that anime)

writing quality is perfect, no noticeable errors story development is also perfect because of the authors originality and plot, this may change though as there's still few released chapters. character design is also perfect, the powers he have may be copied but still logical and nice. fresh and new. updating stability is pretty consistent. world background is the same old DC.

Hey man welcome back after so long, excited for more chapters.

fun story but I already who wrote this kind of story. so j good job stealing my idea. jk good job and you making this reminded me to continue working on my fan fic.

Writing quality is perfect, no noticeable errors story development is also perfect because of the authors originality and plot, this may change though as there's still few released chapters. character design is also perfect, the powers he have may be copied but still logical and nice. fresh and new. updating stability is pretty consistent. world background is the same old DC.

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There is a similar novel but in marvel and is very good you can check it for inspiration

I can’t wait for the next part I hope it comes out soon

La historia esta buena realmente espero que se siga actualizando

Please continue it's a good story, it would be a shame to stop there

Okay the reason why I gave you the story development is I really wanted you to drive the mystery behind him more and then the Justice League trying to find out who he was I will say this I don't like the fact that he's okay with Justice League because to be honest I never really liked the Justice League I liked what they stood for but they imposed a lot of their beliefs on these kids and he shouldn't have to go to the Justice League what it is is Batman's wanting to control what he can do that's just what I'm seeing from it Batman was like that in the show you know the kids were wanting to do and stuff on their own and they were basically denying in every chance you know I'm hoping that eventually he gets fed up with it I like more of the fanfiction where he stays with them for a little bit but then he says how I want to go on my own and he's not going to have a talk about it because to be honest even if it was like he absorbs the powers like someone says I think it would be really cool for them to be like you know he turns them into earrings and stuff like that so it'd be real unless you cut the ear off you can't really get his or unless you have metal manipulation ability or like no I think absorb would be better because if you sit there and had them turn into earrings I mean his sister and say they couldn't have earth related abilities and ripped rip the earrings off I will say this though I'm I like a lot of the story lines where there's some Mysteries surrounding it like I really want someone to do a Harry Potter series where it is a reborn but eventually they go back to the times of Grindelwald basically the storyline goes where they're under the radar but they help from the Shadows from the main part and then they go back to the crimes of Grindelwald and look who's trying to figure out who this person is I will say that I like the story but I really wish that he would not have went with Batman I think it would have been better for him just to move space and do something different and his sister and say that he can't down the line get something where he can just change his face whenever he wants and people can't figure out who he is

Overall a really enjoyable story. There are several paragraph comments throughout of complaints about things but they're all situational and people hating on certain characters that are causing problems lol But it's really good. If you're thinking of giving it a go but aren't sure I suggest you give it a chance, I personally think it's worth the read. And it's still at, essentially, the start of the story so there's lots of room for growth 😁😁👍👍

This reminds me of the Marvel One. Ahhh that was 4 to 5 years ago.

Love the fic

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I love the idea of ​​the talismans and the mask is just a plus+ I can't wait for the next chapters ...................................................... ......................................................................................................................