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He has so much power that he avoids making certain simple and sensible decisions, and forces a justification for why he didn't make a particular choice, which only serves to keep the story going, something that could have ended and finished right there, since he had a protagonist with transcendent strength.
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I hope it doesn't fall, it has a lot of potential. ................................................................... ...................................................................
looks promising..............................................................................................................................
I liked what I read so far.
Just one question: Are there 2 personalities or 2 souls in the protagonist's body?
You should have started the story 2 years before graduation! I barely see any connections of friendship and familiarity with the protagonist's generation, he seems distant, and at the same time everyone says he is kind and a genius in the ninja academy, of course not on Sasuke's level.