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Author, the story seems to be going very well so far, so I tell you that it would be better if you eliminated the harem category and focused only on the romance with one character because otherwise the story will gradually become more generic until in the end it was only about get the new girl like they were pokemons
and you sound like someone in the closet with an ultra religious father who hits his son because his wife left him for another woman 🤨📸🏳️🌈 PS: now I'm sure you're not older than 13, don't worry if you talk about the abuse to another adult, it will surely help you
This story could only be written by a 17-year-old boy who was mistreated by his father because he saw him hug one of his friends on his birthday.😐😐😐😐😐😐😐
The best option is 2 you could choose the fusion of skills and techniques that could solve the problem of slots making one technique have multiple powers by combining the ability of fire and ice making you gain control of both elements making one technique count for two
................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ Cada vez me queda mas claro que el autor tiene un fetiche con los discapacitados Para el autor 😘
Esta historia tiene mucho potencial sigue con el buen trabajo autor 😎 .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................