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Just googled it. Didn't not know that was a thing. But, apparently part of the uniform was a stick which is actually just a small cane. That school boys had to take with them to school as part of their uniforms.
No worries bruh.
I agree. The writing does seem to get better on later chapter. You should also break up the paragraphs a bit, cuz some them can get pretty dense and confusing to read.
I think I'm allowed to express my opinion. As long as I'm respectful. Unlike other people I'm not telling you how to write your story or character nor did I cuss you out or insult you in any way shape or form. Perhaps my biggest gripe is that some of his actions just don't make sense. Sometimes he is very charismatic and helpful and other times he just does a 180 and slaughters everyone for no reason. I like a ruthless MC just as much as the next guy, but the characterisation is all over the place for the MC. Like I was just reading the chapter when he went to Star Wars and made friends with that Rhino dude and it was actually a pretty nice moment, but then we have him slaughtering innocent people for seemingly no gain during the Demon Slayer arc. The scenes were he actually interacts with other characters are actually pretty great but every once in a while he turns psycho at the drop of a hat. It's like he has a split personality or something. If almost feels like you are writing two different characters and it's anyone's guess which one we will get. Again I'm not telling you what to do. That's just my take on it.
Just give up. At this point I believe he is doing it on purpose.
Her = for females (girls) His = for males (boys) It = for animals or non-living things Memorize it.
Yeah, you are right. The grammar was much better in older chapters.
Bruh, write a proper sentence please.
Dude your grammar these past couple of chapters is all over the place.