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The Legend of the Yellow Haired Butcher (Namikaze Minato Self insert)

Penulis: DioBrando666
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What is The Legend of the Yellow Haired Butcher (Namikaze Minato Self insert)

Baca novel The Legend of the Yellow Haired Butcher (Namikaze Minato Self insert) yang ditulis oleh penulis DioBrando666 yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. A Young adult dies and reincarnates as Minato Namikaze. Shenanigans ensue.This is not my fanfiction . All the credits go to Divyansh Kundu...

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A Young adult dies and reincarnates as Minato Namikaze. Shenanigans ensue. This is not my fanfiction . All the credits go to Divyansh Kundu

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슬롯 전문 밀리언 슬롯 국내 최대 온라인 슬롯머신 게임 종합 사이트 밀리언슬롯 을 소개합니다 슬롯머신게임 특화 온라인카지노 바로 밀리언슬롯 입니다. 밀리언슬롯 안에 슬롯머신 게임 외에도 릴게임 빠찡코 스포츠 경마 그래프 등 여러가지 게임을 즐기실수 있는 멀티슬롯게임 배팅사이트 입니다 높은 첫입금 보너스와 정말 다양한 이벤트로 현재 급부상하고 있는 No.1 슬롯전문 사이트 밀리언슬롯 ◁【ak1616. CΟM 코드 vip34 】카톡/텔 [ b o q i 8 8 ] ◁【ak1616. CΟM 코드 vip34 】카톡/텔 [ b o q i 8 8 ] ◁【ak1616. CΟM 코드 vip34 】카톡/텔 [ b o q i 8 8 ] #프라그마틱 슬롯게임#하바네로 슬롯게임#분고 슬롯게임 #리얼타임게임 슬롯게임#BB테크 슬롯게임#마이크로 슬롯게임 #아시아게임밍 슬롯게임#에보플레이 슬롯게임#플레이스타 슬롯게임 #아리스토크랏 슬롯게임#제네시스 슬롯게임#CQ9 슬롯게임 #에볼루션게이밍 바카라#올벳 바카라#드림게이밍 바카라 #마이크로게이밍 바카라#섹시게이밍 바카라#아시아게이밍 바카라 #오리엔탈플러스 바카라#bbin 바카라#비보게이밍 바카라 #프라그매틱 #크레이지슬롯 #인터넷슬롯사이트 #온라인슬롯추천 #온라인슬롯사이트 #온라인슬롯 #오공슬롯 #신규슬롯사이트 #슬롯커뮤니터 #슬롯추천 #슬롯사이트 #슬롯머신사이트 #슬롯머신 #슬롯나라 #사설슬롯사이트 #모바일슬롯사이트 #메가슬롯 #마블슬롯 #슬롯게임 #핑크 슬롯 주소 #플레이 슬롯 슬롯사이트 〃 【ak1616. CΟM 코드 vip34 】카톡/텔 [ b o q i 8 8 ] 〃 슬롯머신사이트 온라인슬롯사이트 인터넷슬롯사이트 모바일슬롯사이트 슬롯나라 슬롯커뮤니티 메가슬롯 밀리언슬롯 오공슬롯 신규슬롯사이트 온라인슬롯추천 마블슬롯 슬롯추천 /슬롯사이트/슬롯머신사이트/온라인슬롯사이트/인터넷슬롯사이트/모바일슬롯사이트 /슬롯나라/슬롯커뮤니티/메가슬롯/밀리언슬롯/오공슬롯/온라인슬롯추천/마블슬롯/슬롯추천 #플래시게임제작 #플래시게임사이트 #플래시게임개발 #프라그마틱 슬롯 #파워볼 전용 사이트 승부벳 #밀리언슬롯 주소 #투투슬롯 #터치스크린렌탈 #터치스크린게임 #탑슬롯 주소 #탑슬롯 #키오스크대여 #키오스크게임 #크레이지슬롯 환수율 #크레이지슬롯 추천 #크레이지슬롯 주소 #크레이지슬롯 가입머니 슬롯머신게임【A K 1 6 1 6.CΦ Μ◀ 코드 vip34 ◁】【ㅋr톡&텔레◀】 카지노슬롯머신사이트 카지노슬롯머신사이트

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Wolfsword
WolfswordLv5Wolfsword

I like the two chapter that is actually about the mc and even like the idea of how you're doing the story I just wish the other six chapters weren't just stuff that doesn't really matter when you currently only have two chapters on the actual mc. I feel like if you had added these little journal entries later in the story like when you had even ten or so chapters it wouldn't be as harmful but when there are six journal entries and only two actual chapters. I say this because it is like watching a tv show and out of 8 episodes only two have to do with the actual plot the other six are just random stuff that don't fully even make sense because you are alluding to stuff that's not important cause we have barely gotten to know the mc. I am you have a couple of journal entries before we even get to understand anything about the mc.

WaltzWannaWrite
WaltzWannaWriteLv13WaltzWannaWrite

READ THIS REVIEW FULLY, AUTHOR!! I will give you five stars just because I liked the idea of Minato insert and good writing quality. BUT!!! I have complaints AUTHOR!!! I only want to read the story from Minato's POV. Some relevant character's POV here and there in the middle is Ok. But, I absolutely don't like the Journal idea. One chpater, I am reading how Minato started his journey. Next, it is about how he trashed Iwa Shinobis in the form of Journal. And the event is about some years away from what is happening in Minato's POV. This seriously breaks the flow man, and I honestly can't bring myself to wait for new chapters as I don't know what the new chapter will be about. From Minato's POV which I am eager to read or the Journal form that I dislike. I SUGGEST (emphasis on suggest) you to maybe rewrite this fic. Don't shy away from the effort it will take as I can confidently say that if you do rewrite this in a linear timeline manner, this will FF will be hella popular. There are lot of Lazy readers like me in here who will enjoy reading that way instead of trying hard to connect the flow of events in the chapter by ourselves. Good Luck, Bro.

UmU_UmU_UmU_UmU
UmU_UmU_UmU_UmULv4UmU_UmU_UmU_UmU

best naruto fanfiction ever everything is logical and have explinatiom have no plot holes real life naruto no pg over all osm UmU UmU Umu

Akshay_Dere
Akshay_DereLv1Akshay_Dere

Very good novel it is excellent.worth it Is this novel really over plz reply. It was very good.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Aayush_Gaur
Aayush_GaurLv3Aayush_Gaur

Bro you were translating a story earlier, "reincarnated in bleach as a nobel"... I found the story overview interesting.. can you guide me to original work.

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