Review Detail of WaltzWannaWrite in The Legend of the Yellow Haired Butcher (Namikaze Minato Self insert)

READ THIS REVIEW FULLY, AUTHOR!! I will give you five stars just because I liked the idea of Minato insert and good writing quality. BUT!!! I have complaints AUTHOR!!! I only want to read the story from Minato's POV. Some relevant character's POV here and there in the middle is Ok. But, I absolutely don't like the Journal idea. One chpater, I am reading how Minato started his journey. Next, it is about how he trashed Iwa Shinobis in the form of Journal. And the event is about some years away from what is happening in Minato's POV. This seriously breaks the flow man, and I honestly can't bring myself to wait for new chapters as I don't know what the new chapter will be about. From Minato's POV which I am eager to read or the Journal form that I dislike. I SUGGEST (emphasis on suggest) you to maybe rewrite this fic. Don't shy away from the effort it will take as I can confidently say that if you do rewrite this in a linear timeline manner, this will FF will be hella popular. There are lot of Lazy readers like me in here who will enjoy reading that way instead of trying hard to connect the flow of events in the chapter by ourselves. Good Luck, Bro.