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The Heatherland

Penulis: TheSuccessor
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WE HAVE FATE BUT NOT DESTINY

Dunia merupakan tempat yg indah, setiap tempat memiliki keunikan dan keindahannya sendiri. Sama dengan manusia, laki laki atau perempuan, muda maupun tua, tinggi maupun pendek, dan walaupun berbeda negara dan budaya sekalipun setiap insan memiliki keunikannya tersendiri. Di setiap tempat, setiap orang memiliki takdirnya sendiri sendiri, dan tidak setiap orang bisa menerima takdir mereka dengan baik. Namun manusia merupakan mahkluk yang misterius, walaupun mereka sudah tersiksa, terlantar, sendiri, terasingkan, dan menderita sepanjang hidupnya namun mereka bisa tetap berdiri tegak walaupun kaki dan tangannya sudah lecet dan berdarah karena jatuh berkali-kali. Namun, setiap insan memiliki alasannya masing-masing, mengapa mereka masih berdiri dan tidak menyerah, 85% orang akan menjawab hal yang membangun dan memotivasi. Seorang lelaki dengan ekspresi yang tak dapat dijelaskan menjawab, "Karena Tuhan memberikan hidup kepada kita untuk melihat dunia tak hanya dari satu sisi. Setiap orang akan memiliki jalan mereka sendiri. Dan ending mereka sendiri, if you keep walking ... The World is yours." Lalu bagaimana dengan 15% nya? Seorang wanita yang tak terlihat matanya menoleh, tersenyum kecil dan menjawab, "Cause we dont have a desire to end it and neither to continue living" itu adalah jawaban wanita tersebut, bagaimana dengan kalian? Apa kalian termasuk dalam 15% orang tersebut? Atau 85% sisanya? Di dalam cerita ini, tidak semua bisa dijelaskan dengan kata kata, hanya dengan tatapan mata semua dapat tersampaikan. Karena rasa sakit tidak bisa dirasakan orang lain tanpa mengalaminya sendiri. Dapatkah kalian tahu, bagaimana rasanya menjadi orang yang tersesat dan berada di antara kerumunan yang ramai? Note, ini hanyalah cerita pendek yang author tuliskan berdasarkan apa yang ia rasakan, dengan sedikit perbedaan tempat dan jalan cerita. Perhatian ;) Endingnya tidak akan indah kawan. Because the world never allows it. Prepare your heart ;)

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THE ALMIGHTY DEMON

20000 years ago, when homosapiens evolved from and lived along with apes and other animals in the African forest as a group, hunted animals for food and ate their flesh, Slept with any woman and had sex indiscriminately, the demon world threw waves long the planes of heaven and earth by birthing a hybrid child with six bloodlines. The major two being the Gin and Sambwa. One was known for its deviousness and the other for its bewitching beauty. Both were brutal in combat. The child's beauty was not something to scoff at. It is to be noted that none from then to now has ever been the number one beauty in all worlds. Not, beast, not human, not even the mages who could readjust a cook up beauty recipes could catch up. She was named Laddu in light of her explosive personality, beauty and abilities. nd she was able to rule beasts and humans alike despite living in a world dominated by testosterone males because more than testosterone, power ruled and if she was second, no one dared to be at the top of the power ladder. until she was betrayed by friends and family. even her subordinate gave up on her. she self-destructed in a moment of anger and this damaged her soul that went rough several reincarnations cycles until she was finally pieced together and awakened by one naive university student and together they set off on a journey of revenge, vengeance, camaraderie and growth to achieve the ultimate position that was denied her the first time around...as the Almighty demon

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Rathowm
RathowmLv1Rathowm

A very recommended read. The chapters flow well and the story is interesting from the get-go. Good characters and world building. Keep on writing. Great job.

LolaSigne
LolaSigneLv10LolaSigne

First few chapters piqued my interest, as they are very well written. Great character building, looking forward to read more chapters. This novel's a keeper!

TofSpades
TofSpadesLv3TofSpades

Amazing! Very intense from the start. The world background is so intriguing and fascinating that you’re hooked from the get go. And the words come together to create such a beautiful tale. Amazing!

With45
With45Lv1With45

The book is very good because it very interesting, and mysterious. I like how we first start with knowing abosutely nothing, but things start to unfold the more we read.

LordYang
LordYangLv1LordYang

Honestly speaking, your novel is very easy to read. I read all seven chapters in one sitting. I assure you that you have a lot of potential. I quite liked your book. Personally, it's the kind of story I like.

Deep_Sabre25
Deep_Sabre25Lv1Deep_Sabre25

Pretty well-written and well-paced story with a cool back cover of the book. You did a great job on this. The first chapter was brilliant. Albeit dark. But great nonetheless

ShadowAmeratsu
ShadowAmeratsuLv2ShadowAmeratsu

This is a very gripping story from the get-go, telling an impressive tale about the main character and his life inside of the world he only knows as his home. I'd really recommend it to anyone who's contemplating it!

Ident
IdentLv1Ident

The story is very mysterious in many ways, and when it gives a very suspenseful feeling when you read it. Now I don't know much about the world background because it's just a few more chapters, but... I'm not disappointed

A_literal_nugget
A_literal_nuggetLv1A_literal_nugget

(First chapter review only) General thoughts: It's alright. Nothing exactly exciting or intriguing has occurred to draw in much investment. Kinda stereotypical orphanage setting. Very show rather than tell writing. Obviously, it's the first chapter so much can't be said about the world or characters in the long-term, yet there is still so much lacking. Not enough is given to the reader to warrant more interest in the world or characters. Besides, maybe a poorly built fling and the protagonist being an orphan.

Legacy_za
Legacy_zaLv12Legacy_za

This book is about a orphan who goes through struggles and feels alone in a world, he his crush is a girls name gwen who is beautiful, however all his efforts are in vein, his with his painful life cycle, His closest friend was micah, I dont want to expose to much detail but its a good book highly recommended? Its descriptive , great plot, definitely a page turner, Great work Author thank you

Darkanzel
DarkanzelLv11Darkanzel

Wow... the author is doing great... I can't believe I found this hidden gem which has been written beautifully. I must recommend this book to other readers as well...❤️‍🩹

safa_bukhari
safa_bukhariLv2safa_bukhari

Your story is extraordinary. your grip on your plot is very strong. Arrangements of characters are excellent, no doubt. waiting for the next chapters. keep it up..

thefirespeaks
thefirespeaksLv11thefirespeaks

I only had the grasp of the world background when I read the story's description. However, when I read up until Chapter 3, I still can't picture out what kind of world he was in. You may work on this one but may choose not to if the story was character-driven and world-building only serves as an aid to move the plot forward. As for the writing quality, I am happy that your tenses are quite consistent. However, you should refrain from using the same structure of sentences almost all the time, even if you want to convey an emotion, for example, to your readers. There had to be limitations unless it may sound choppy if you read the paragraphs for the sentences aloud. Instead of using pronouns or nouns at the start of the sentence, you may use prepositions, adverbs, verbs, or adjectives even, to amplify diversification. It can bore the reader if you keep doing this, especially in the first chapter. Nevertheless, I loved the characters. The boy was quite pitiful and it made me feel sorry for him. That's a good thing. Anyhow, keep it up, author! You'll definitely get to where you're aiming to arrive! :))

Kittylovely
KittylovelyLv3Kittylovely

The first time i've read a novel with two protagonists and i love it! most protags are sometimes lonely, is good to see a protag with a bosom friend by his side! Thanks for the great novel author-san~[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Yanie_Long
Yanie_LongLv2Yanie_Long

Great command of the English Grammer. The flow is consistent and fliud. This story is very interesting and well thought out. I love the descriptions as well.

Dinessu
DinessuLv2Dinessu

I found myself wanting to give you a 5 star review but then I didn't for my own jealousy, I was jealous as an author the way your three person pov was well written. The story it's self was well written.. what made you have more readers is not the review or anything but your work is good.

Blooddoctor
BlooddoctorLv13Blooddoctor

Intriguing at the beginning and more as one proceeds. I love the depiction. There is a mystery building and it gives this book a huge boost! I love everything about it but there are a few typo/g errors. If would be exceptional when it goes through editing 🖤

ThePotatoKing
ThePotatoKingLv14ThePotatoKing

It's a very fun read. From the very start I was drawn towards the characters, their problems and their motivations. As the story gradually unfold you start to learn more and more about the world. It's really great.

Sunus_Writes
Sunus_WritesLv2Sunus_Writes

Reading the first chapter definitely piqued my interest as to what the background of the MC is, coupled with his mental thoughts which draws in the reader. A promising book ❤️

Jolan_Hildebrandt
Jolan_HildebrandtLv1Jolan_Hildebrandt

Your technical writing needs work. There were a lot of ideas that could've been fleshed out better. Amnesia is a tricky plot device as it requires you to skirt the line between the fear of what was before the memory loss, and the hope of a happier past.

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