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No More Fantasy

Author: Retsag
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Read No More Fantasy novel written by the author Retsag on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Fantasy stories, covering action, adventure, magic, mystery, transmigration. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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Sansoul was the prince of a rundown empire in a world full of monsters and incredible magic, until he one day activated an unknown machine that transported him in a futuristic world governed by hyper advance Artificial Intelligence. Finding himself in a completely unfamiliar world with technologies he can’t comprehend, follow him as he tries to live his new life admits the constant chaos of his surroundings and new found responsibilities. But he isn’t the only one who changed world, as Âmeless as children who had everything taken away from him takes his place as a prince and tries to live his life the way he always wanted to. Will they rise up to the task and save their new home from the numerous dangers or fail and leave a world with No More Fantasy!?

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With a full swing she landed on the ground from the balcony of the tall building, in her hand was a shining diamond" she rub it against her chest with a smile and raise it up to the night sky which was clear and a proud moon at it fullest. "There finally mine" she said licking her lips, she look behind to see Romero not present yet. "Put that down" She heard from opposite her" Slowly with a maniac smile she turned. The first thing that caught her sight was that of a detective not just any detective but a very handsome one. "What's this are pretty men now being recruited to work for the government" she said gazing at him lazily. "I said put that down " he told her sternly. She chuckled and raised her hand much higher than his. "Let see who shoot first shall we" she told him, the man brow raised his jet black hair wet obviously from sweat. "Let me go first then" she told him and unexpectedly she took a shot at him it wheeze past him. His jaw harden as two shoots was released from her bullet. He didn't flinch. She broke into a smile seeing this, he was as crazy as she was. He raised his gun and also took a swing at her, the bullet wheeze pass her scratching her cheek a little blood sip out trickling down her neck. If not for the direct orders from the higher ups with the stunt she pulled with him the bullet would have been buried deep in her heart by now. " Fabio" He heard his name and the next seconds the fire went off from behind. He pulled her to the side both hiding behind a pillar. They stood so close their lips was almost touching. Her lips curl into a grin and called. "Fabio?" His name rolled off her lips "Stay still" he warned. A car drove over in speed the one behind the wheel called out to her after making a quick reverse. "Hades quick" she look over at her companion who look crazily disheveled she took a quick survey around before turning back to Fabio, with a quick pace she place a card in his jacket before running off. He was about going after her to retrieve what she had stolen but another fire was opened and he stayed back cursing silently. He watch her get into the car and wink at him before driving off. "Damn it" he mutter. Who was she? a top tier Mafia princess daughter to the most scariest and biggest Mafia lord, he wasn't just big he holds a power in the government making them invisible to the law. And Hade Alamilla was one scary fella.Unlike her father she is more grave very lethal, She wants it she gets it nothing else matters. "I want him" she told Romero who drove the car. Romero look at the rear mirror not taking his eyes off the road , he wasn't surprised but he was rather worried. "You should give it up, he isn't just any detective, he's Fabiola Mendez. He's called wiper he doesn't leave is stake dirty he wipe them all out with a single move, I heard he was ordered by the government to cover the treasures being stolen, he's an Undercover agent who only appears when things get critical." Romero said trying to make her see the harm in her next hobby. "I don't care I want him" Hades said giving Romero a grave look which he knows too well. Thing we're about to go down if she didn't get what she wants. Did I fail to mention she is also a spoilt brat who can't have no for an answer. .

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Retsag
RetsagAuthorRetsag

Welcome to No More Fantasy! I hope you are enjoying reading meless and Sansoul bizarre adventure as much as I'm enjoying writing them (which means a lot). I try to publish 2 or 3 chapters a week that are between 1500 and 2500 words. I can't give a precise release schedule, but chapters are released 2 or 3 days apart from one another. I'm trying my best to make an interesting and compelling story, but if you have any recommendation/advice/ideas on how to make it better I would greatly appreciate if you were to share theme with me :] If you want to contact me, please do so on twitter at: @Retsag99 or by joining the official NMF discords: discord.gg/5sDqHM57XG Thank for reading and have a nice day :] Sincerely Retsag99 Ps: Which character is your favorite? I just want to know.

Leo_Magnien
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I recommand reading, it is a good story, with funny chataters and cool places like the casino and the cathedrale Notre Dame des Paris! (Im not good at English, sorry for the mistakes)

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Little_North_Star
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A good book, i enjoyed reading, love the wtiting style, love the characters in it.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

qurat_ul_ain4
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Well ! The plot is very fascinating.. The only minor problem is that you been shifting between past and present tense.. Just proofread before you publish! Overall, good work, Author! <3

jungkooks_luna
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Good work author, I enjoyed every chapter I read. The story development was great. The character design was awesome. Good luck to talented author

GMSJakers
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Good story, and very funny characters make this an enjoying read. I love it a lot, I really do.

Prince_nonchalant
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I must commend the author for trying something unique. This will be a honest review from me detailing what I think about the story. Synopsis: Not a bad synopsis. I can't say it will captivate every reader but it sure will catch the attention of those interested in this genre. Princes, technology, magic, it's all an interesting concept. Writing Quality: The grammar isn't unreadable. It's good compared to a lot of books on this website. However, I gave this a 4 because there were quite a few missing punctuation marks, run-on sentences, and incomplete words. At first, I was going to grant you the 5 since you stated that English isn't your first language but that's not the main issue as your grammar surpasses a lot of English speakers. I believe editing is your downfall here because the incomplete words aren't subject to grammar. I'd recommend reviewing your chapters and fixing those incomplete words. Development: The book has decent pacing. You're thrown in without understanding much. But personally, it lacked a little flavor, which is fine because that was only at the starting chapters. I also liked the concept of having 2 MCs. That can be tricky to handle but if done well, you can ace it. 4. Characters: Well, the prince seems the most energetic out of everyone. Great personality for the characters. No complaints there. However, the designs were a bit lacking imo. I usually don't mark for design unless the author decides to do designs. But your designs only included the clothes the characters were wearing and gave no physical reference. Of course, this could just be preference which is why I won't mark very hard for it. 4. World Background: This is what the book lacks most, especially in the first chapter. I was trying so hard to imagine where the character was. You gave context clues that he was running through some sort of forest which is why he fell etc. But it still wasn't enough. There were a few more instances like this. Some done better than others. I gave this a 3 as I believe improvements could be made. Overall: I hope you don't think I marked you too hard. I'm not saying your book is bad by any means. Not even close. I just believe there is room for improvement and that goes for every author inclusive of myself. Correct these minor issues and you'll have a story of gold. Don't give up author. Writing is difficult but persevere. I've been there but not giving up is the key. Good luck!

Empzze
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Okay, I'm going to say this, one word to describe this novel is AMAZING... The plot is just...WOW, it's different in a unique way, not like the typical transmigration novel's I've read, although there are some grammar errors but it's not a little editing can't fix, in all keep up the good work author, I'm rooting for you🙌🙌🙌

AWHavoc
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I highly recommend reading this book! The attention to detail and vivid story telling allows you to fully experience the story at hand and allows for a wonderful journey. You won't be disappointed!

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Valentin_Guinet
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NMF isn't just an web novel... It's a masterpiece, with perfectly written characters and plenty of backstory to understand the world context

Violet_Ivory
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I like it, your english is good and i like the addition of subtle humour in your writing, the story is good and the characters can be in a way improved through adding little details in their behavious to make them feel more 3d. With how many chapters youve got under your belt, im sure the writing quality improves drastically when comparing beginning to latest chapters 👍

Iceknith
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The worlds of NMF (No More Fantasy) are as intriguing as they are complex and beautiful. The caracters are funny and attaching. I would recomend this book to litterally anyone. GO READ IT NOW.

Rin_Nurnia
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Yep! Another good story, definitely enjoyed my time reading the first 3 chapters, i highly recommend, the author has done a good job telling us the general plot.

Timeo_1806
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cool j'ai adoréeeeeeeeeeeeee j'avance pas vite mais c'est bien

Evxl_Eye
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Although this wasn't what I was looking for, I couldn't help but leave a shameless review. I've read some of the comments and it seems you genuinely try to improve and enjoy writing this story. Thus, I shall leave you with this. Farewell.

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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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