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Sure, I have a twitter, Reddit and Discord acount if you want to speak in private or public.

Whoa, who knew that going up to a stranger and shouting at them about their work was a valid marketing strategy ? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ On a more serious note, thanks :] I hope I helped you improve your story even if just a little bit

ps: your turn now

... what did I just read ?I... I don't know what to think.It's just so long and all over the place without clearly stating what the main focus of the book is about.I feel in increasing order: intrigued, extremely confused and completly apathic to it all.In conclusion and no mater if its intentional or not: its bad

If you're refering to the "it" in "its pray", then it is correct.The "it" is replacing predator

yeah, it's abdurdly distracting to repeat absurdly so much.I'll stop this absurdity in about two absurdly long hours!

Iceknith: *in heavy british upperclass acsent*

Hey, we should really fire the guy who though this was a good idea.

Every ancient object collector/museum be like:

Nicole