I like it, your english is good and i like the addition of subtle humour in your writing, the story is good and the characters can be in a way improved through adding little details in their behavious to make them feel more 3d. With how many chapters youve got under your belt, im sure the writing quality improves drastically when comparing beginning to latest chapters đ
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