Review Detail of qurat_ul_ain4 in No More Fantasy

Item: No More Fantasy
Rating: 4

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Well ! The plot is very fascinating.. The only minor problem is that you been shifting between past and present tense.. Just proofread before you publish! Overall, good work, Author! <3

No More Fantasy

Retsag

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Already replied to that issue, I'm curently going throught the story chapter by chapter fixing it. It's just that chapter's one state is much better then the rest for now, so it's not my top priority, but I'll fixit soon.

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