NotBeatrix
Before I properly start the review I will say the following, while reading this I got some flash backs to Black Butler, one of the many anime I watched when I was starting to become a Otaku, and is one of the stories that I still follow to this day. Now the review, what can I say more than "I LOVE IT", honestly I don't even think I can come up with anything else but this to say, the seting is fantastic and the characters, god the characters are just amazing (Erin is the perfect type of MFL for this and it's a type of character I like a young lady from a rich family that is also spoiled and Ezra, our MML, he is so cool also the perfect choice for this, the way he plays with Erin makes me smile as I read this and hes also so mystirious that makes it even better!) and to top it all off this is very well written which is allways a plus! All in all I really liked this and you got yourself a fan!
This is an enjoyable read. I like the pacing of the story and how well the characters had been introduced. I like it when I can hate the characters yet sympathize with them. There are few typos and grammar issues but the writing is still excellent. I like the detailed character description and how well the author can put the emotions into words. Keep on updating! :)
I soooooooo love this book. I love the character development, the plot setting. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I've been a fan of the devil being the embodiment of something true, not something completely evil. 93 chapters is a long way to read it shows how dedicated the author is, i also love how one chapter is divided into two hehe, amazingly written, the plot is something id love to see in an animeeee! keep it uppppp!!!
Quite a nice writing style. While dialogue is more used than descriptions about surroundings, readers can make a decent image in their mind by just reading through the dialogue. Which is an art in and of itself. I do like the characterization of the characters without using much description, which is --again-- a very good thing. I've noticed slight mistakes/missing words like missing 'his', 'theirs' and a single occasion of a misused word, so quite well-written. But none of these "mistakes" take away from the reading experience. The characters are all beautifully portraited with enough drama between secondary characters to make them interesting as well! Very nice job! If I make one suggestion for the future: Try to use more descriptions of surroundings. Most people have enough with your language ad dialogue and/or can imagine the scene right in front of them. Others can't or would like to have some help from the writer, at least. Last but not least, please keep up the work! You are doing brilliantly!
Wow, this book certainly took me on a wild ride for a few hours. Colorful characters, perfect dialogue and a great sense of humor really drew me in from the start. And that was before any of the crazy supernatural stuff came rushing in. Incredibly enjoyable. I hope this work is finished soon so I can catch the ending.