A GREAT CHILDRENS BOOK FOR SURE, i wish it could be animated aghhhhhh because its like something id love watching on discovery kids or something, intriguing but easy to understand concepts, truly impressed ! hehe. HOWEVER IM GONNA REVIEW IT FROM AN IMAGINATIVE CHILD'S POV SO I GIVE IT A 5.5/5.
SO MANY WORDS TO SAY BUT ONE REMAINS (refer to gif) A well formatted book with loads and loads of scope, the cover does justice to the plot and the writing especially compliments the story so well because of the tone set, A GREAT WELL FORMATTED GOOD VOCABULARY AND DETAILED BOOK!
is this a biography? because if it is, I'm just stunned by the writing and experiences, the reader doesn't get a brief glimpse but an in depth exploration of the MC's struggle with mental health. I'm just stunned, This is metaphorical in a beautiful ways and painful to read too, i wanna see more though! post more !!!! keep me notified
For a book titled this, YOULL NOT BE DISAPPOINTED AT ALL ITS IN FACT, MUCH BETTER WRITTEN THAN EXPECTED. Im quite impressed to an extent.Thought it was metaphorical but this is simply adorable, i don really know if there's toooo much of a story line here but please incorporate and unveil details about the 10th life strongly in the lateral- newer chapters please! there's still scope for improvement! WONT LIE, OKAY, I THOUGHT THIS WAS GOING TO BE A STUPID AF BOOK. because in my mind i was like "WHO TF WRITES ABOUT A HOUSE CAT'S 10TH LIFE?!" anyway, moving on, As an author i believe you have great potential to whirl this story in better ways or even, write a new novel, explore your creativity! I just deducted stars because idk how much potential it has exactly, but do keep me updated after the 10th chapter so i can reread, delete this review and post a 5 on 5 !
LANGUAGE - A PLOT- A ROMAN'S CHARACTER - A THE EXPRESSION OF EMOTIONS - A this is honestly a great plot wont lie! i just really would love to see the dots connecting as things go on further because I'm a little confused and bewildered out here because of the deliberate open endings, quite intelligently procured!
LETS BREAK THIS DOWN TO PLUSSES AND MINUSES +great plot and definitive scope for development +intriguing characters +great prologue and material +mc's pov is fresh and its quite different - grammatical errors - lack of effort into formatting -its just a new book! so i'd love to read further to do justice to this and leave a rating ^-^ keep me notified when u post 10 chaps at least, dm me on insta @gaureeey or email me on email@example.com and i will help u out to the best of my ability !
okay, wont lie, its too stretched out but tbvh from the first 10 chapters all that i understood was why readers are so devoted to this novel! its truly exasperating to read a work of fiction like this, HOW DO U EVEN COME UP WITH SUCH PLOTS WTHHHHH I'm shookkk.
i LOVE YOUR PERSPECTIVE ON THIS, THE SYNOPSIS LURES READERS RIGHT IN,DOESNT IT? apart from that the MC is very strong, pro tip, introduce the concept of flaws and it'll help with the character development! love this! a few grammatical errors here and there but its okay, happens to the best of people, an over all OOOO0
Pulls all the right strings of thrill, so far, a well-constructed story, there's just 5 chapters so I'm only judging it based off of this, keep going! all the best POST MORE.
intriguing plot, full of differences and inter-plots, sounds super super cool to me, the prologue doesn't dojusttice to the rest of the book though so please focus on that. apart from this i'd give a 5/5 but took 0.2 stars for this ONLY! will reedit further, POST MORE CHAPS
MY SPIRIT ANIMAL IS A WOLF! and I've been gaming under the name sshewolff for agessss now, this story is amazing, you've shown the depth of emotion and interdependence perfectly, though, i'd like you to acclimate your book in the behavioral conspiracies that lie around werewolves and wolves themselves, study a little more and it'll only help intensify the story more !LOVE IT
THIS STORY IS FUTURISTIC IN EVERY FORM filled with twists and turns and the translator and you have both done a great job i must say, i am in love with the mc and supporting characters, PLOT TWISTS Major ones!C O M P L E T E L Y UNPREDICTBLE
super glad i stumbled upon this. AN OUTSTANDING PLOT, A STRONG PROTAGONIST, WELL-WRITTEN NOVEL. GREAT JOB!!!! and honestly there's 11 chapters only and I would love to read further, the cover again, doesn't do much justice!
-0.2 because some spellings need to be checked! but except for that its perfect, it outlines perfectly the toxicity of a relationship and why she chooses to stay, also encompasses emotional attachment and it goes about approaching and exploring the character and her thoughts, its beautifully written, wont lie !
a little confused as theres too many characters and tooooo many locations so imma read it once again to decipher the internalties! thank u, will be completing it tom if I can
yeah but im still disappointed bruh!