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Hi! Thank you for posting this, as a reader and writer I found this very helpful to advertise by not being forceful or anything, and connect readers who wanted to read something new that are sometimes hard to find. HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Hello thanks for pointing this out! You're a big help ^^
For blackmailing purposes LOL
This is just so poetic! I don't know but it just gives me the poetic writing style vibe in here and it's a really nice reading experience! I also love the title, very unusual to me and I love unusual things LOL Keep it up author!
But it's easier to write in the laptop ;)
Alright! As a reader I value friendship, and I'll do what Xiu did, but it was just one heck turn of events that triggers me LOL LOoking forward to what her next move will be! p.s i ship them so much HAHAHAHA
Show don't tell, it's what happening in this story as it's very descriptive but in a good way! Characters are introduced in early chapters which help readers point who is who, good luck author!
This si too long, please cut this, to make the reading experience clear and easy ^^
Action! I feel this story have more action written chaps and I enjotyed the first chapter! I also love the title, may I point out! And reading it, I can vividly watch every scene inside my head, though please avoid long paragraphs, you mat cut them. Overall it's exciting!
Love the font!
HAHAHAHAH I love Harry Potter! But I don't want to offend J.K Rowling though! And thanks for pointing mistakes, I'll edit those confusing sentences, ':<
Finally someone noticed my tagline jk! HAHAHAH seriously you're the first one! Makes me proud somebody acknewledged it! And thank you for your awesome review!
Writing quality is excellent! I suggest you cut the paragraph into shorter one since it's easier to read. And the flashback, really shaped the character though I was surprised that it came out early, still a good timing. Overall I love the plot, the story! cheers to the author!
Finally found a novel that is written in a first point of view! I always loved how openly the character talks to the reader, engaging us to go on! Cheers to you author!