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It is Our Destiny

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raima_alam
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Anyone who gives me reviews on this book shouldn't be spam. I am searching for fake accounts and if I find that you are trying to pirate or abuse my readers in the comment section I will actively delete the comments and reviews. This is a copyrighted book so don’t plagiarise. Happy reading!

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Ria_Chy
Ria_ChyLv1Ria_Chy

I find this book very interesting . It is a very creative story. It is not a typical werewolf novel, it involves various species and their cultures and traditions

Ruman_Begum
Ruman_BegumLv1Ruman_Begum

What a wonderful book!I am really impressed by the story.Even though its not fully published its amazing.I really enjoyed this book and hope that this book will be popular.

LAjames
LAjamesLv2LAjames

Nice story! The idea is well thought out and original! Besides the few spelling mistakes here and there, it's an awesome book! Keep going and I hope you are successful!

SB_Moon
SB_MoonLv13SB_Moon

Omg! I liked it very much. The story is good. I'll add it to my library. Even if it has some errors in it, it's okay. Keep going Author. I'm waiting for new chapters...❤

Katherine_petrov
Katherine_petrovLv1Katherine_petrov

hey there. first of all, I love your story description, and then the story was so interesting. I like the way each characters talks in the chapters. You are so good at character development : )

Filea
FileaLv10Filea

The story is great with a rational attitude shown by the characters. I felt a bit troubled with the spacing but overall it is a good to story to read. And also found that the character's pov thing kinda unique.. Dunno if it a good stuff or not but I want to let the author know my thought

8thGradeSyndrome
8thGradeSyndromeLv18thGradeSyndrome

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Zubair_05
Zubair_05Lv2Zubair_05

This is a really good one. I like the twist and all, good idea. But there's still work to do on your plot execution. I look forward to your coming books and can't wait to see your progress

Princeboi
PrinceboiLv1Princeboi

Wow, it's kinda exciting series. I love how active the book it is, there are moments where you can relate to the female wolf. I kinda love it, plus the reveal that she is a world Got me. The names are unique too and make you feel interesting. Plus I believe it's a romantic series- with more ***** development. I like it, will read all the chapters

myona_
myona_Lv11myona_

While the plot is interesting in itself and the world-building is done fantastically, the punctuation could be improved i.e. spaces after a period and before a quote. There are also some missing commas but you usually just read right past them, so it’s not a huge bother. Otherwise, everything is amazing. Characters are unique and the story is different! Keep it up, author!

Raiyan_Alam
Raiyan_AlamLv1Raiyan_Alam

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Joskylar
JoskylarLv3Joskylar

I love your book. It's good work. And I totally recommended this book. I love wolf concepts and romance. Good job. Keep going . Expecting lots.

EldritchTheDead
EldritchTheDeadLv2EldritchTheDead

Not a fan of this genre but it surprised me. Writing style and grammar is decent, story goes well at just the right pace. Although there are some problems here and there but it's not really something worth picking at. Would recommend to any reader out there! Great work author.

KCChakry
KCChakryLv10KCChakry

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Drakonous
DrakonousLv11Drakonous

A stunning world brought to life by the author that, unfortunately, suffers from several grammatical errors or missing words. This story is unique and unlike any other werewolf novel I've read, pleasantly surprising me as it is a refreshing world to read. The werewolves aren't the only part that makes it interesting: so do the other races, but the first 7 chapters suffer from grammatical errors. Spacing is non-existent between the sentences and broke the novel's immersion for me, to the point that I'm reviewing this after 2 days of reading; I just needed "apple juice" to get me in the mood to continue reading, even though I was genuinely interested in the story. Then other parts had some missing words and this time it was one too many for me to point out. As I've suggested in almost all my reviews, I will recommend the author use Grammarly to fix these errors. The other part that that fell flat was the execution and pacing of the story. It sometimes races too fast, moving from one plot to another, without giving the readers (or the characters in the story) a pause. And because of that, some parts don't seem to mesh well. The best example I can remember (from the top of my head) would be how *SPOILERS* accepting Lily is of Delian. Right after meeting him, with almost no hesitation, she accepted him. Now that's a little hard to believe for two reasons: first, and foremost, she was tortured and almost r*ped not just a day ago, and which should've felt like only a few minutes to her since she was unconscious for most of the time. Women who experienced such a traumat*c (why are they censoring this word??) event can't have any male touch her in such a short while; they automatically recoil as that is their body reacting, and this is not considering the mental trau*a she'd have. No matter how close she feels about him, she wouldn't be so accepting, especially if he's a stranger (whom Delian was at the time). Second, she just found out her soulmate likes screwing around with other chicks. To me, I'd feel as though she'd have been less trusting of men after that (I am genuinely surprised that she didn't even think, "Oh, maybe this guy took me to his castle cause he wants to bang me."). Nope, none of that. Because the story was already 10 miles away, focusing on how she accepted him as her older brother. This may sound like a rant, but it's not. Like every other novel out there, it's flawed but that's ok because there are no perfect novels out there. In fact, I still read it to the latest chapter because, no matter how hard it was to read due to the barrage of grammatical errors - or the fast pacing of the story - it was a unique world that I liked and would want to read more of. The characters are fascinating (other than the ML, he's a di*k who's possessive over a girl he pushed away and can sod off) and the world they inhabit are phenomenal.

deepu_
deepu_Lv15deepu_

This book kept me on edge while reading.. Author just my opinion, keep long paragraphs into small ones it will be easy for us while reading.. Also I love the female character more

Blackcrust
BlackcrustLv2Blackcrust

The novel that I consider is unique. These kinds of stories are in the minority. I would highly recommend others who are a fan of the genre to give this one a try. The setting is enough potential to bind the readers. I feel the point of the entire novel is to pour out our emotions buried deep inside. Very Enjoyable Read. Good luck to author and keep up the good work.

Josev_Quadra
Josev_QuadraLv2Josev_Quadra

The story is cool, a little bit different than what imagined from the usual werewolf story. However, it is quite hard to read (cuz the lack of space between the lines). Overall, the story is good! Keep up the good work!

sugarcoatqueenx
sugarcoatqueenxLv3sugarcoatqueenx

This book is really interesting. I am not a fan of wolf stories and I loved learning how another author would write about it. There were a lot of punctuation errors in the first few chapters (I think it was because the author was writing on her cellphone) but it got better in the latter chapters. The story moved fast and the chapters were action-filled!