While the plot is interesting in itself and the world-building is done fantastically, the punctuation could be improved i.e. spaces after a period and before a quote. There are also some missing commas but you usually just read right past them, so it’s not a huge bother. Otherwise, everything is amazing. Characters are unique and the story is different! Keep it up, author!
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