Review Detail of KCChakry in It is Our Destiny
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The writing and the pace is all over the place, the characters are plain with no personality, everything seems rushed and nothing is really explained at all. Firstly, you need to establish the story setting and the characters before diving into the main story. There is a lack of descriptions so you need to work on those. Anyway, keep writing and you'll get better. All the best
It is Our Destiny
raima_alam
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Thank you for taking the review without being offended. That said, dont stop writing, the more you write, the better you will get. And also reading will also help, find a book with the same genre you are interested in and read them carefully and you will get better at writing too. Cheers
raima_alam:Thank you for reporting it to me. I really appreciate your honestyđ
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KCChakry:Thank you for taking the review without being offended. That said, dont stop writing, the more you write, the better you will get. And also reading will also help, find a book with the same genre you are interested in and read them carefully and you will get better at writing too. Cheers