Review Detail of Drakonous in It is Our Destiny

A stunning world brought to life by the author that, unfortunately, suffers from several grammatical errors or missing words. This story is unique and unlike any other werewolf novel I've read, pleasantly surprising me as it is a refreshing world to read. The werewolves aren't the only part that makes it interesting: so do the other races, but the first 7 chapters suffer from grammatical errors. Spacing is non-existent between the sentences and broke the novel's immersion for me, to the point that I'm reviewing this after 2 days of reading; I just needed "apple juice" to get me in the mood to continue reading, even though I was genuinely interested in the story. Then other parts had some missing words and this time it was one too many for me to point out. As I've suggested in almost all my reviews, I will recommend the author use Grammarly to fix these errors. The other part that that fell flat was the execution and pacing of the story. It sometimes races too fast, moving from one plot to another, without giving the readers (or the characters in the story) a pause. And because of that, some parts don't seem to mesh well. The best example I can remember (from the top of my head) would be how *SPOILERS* accepting Lily is of Delian. Right after meeting him, with almost no hesitation, she accepted him. Now that's a little hard to believe for two reasons: first, and foremost, she was tortured and almost r*ped not just a day ago, and which should've felt like only a few minutes to her since she was unconscious for most of the time. Women who experienced such a traumat*c (why are they censoring this word??) event can't have any male touch her in such a short while; they automatically recoil as that is their body reacting, and this is not considering the mental trau*a she'd have. No matter how close she feels about him, she wouldn't be so accepting, especially if he's a stranger (whom Delian was at the time). Second, she just found out her soulmate likes screwing around with other chicks. To me, I'd feel as though she'd have been less trusting of men after that (I am genuinely surprised that she didn't even think, "Oh, maybe this guy took me to his castle cause he wants to bang me."). Nope, none of that. Because the story was already 10 miles away, focusing on how she accepted him as her older brother. This may sound like a rant, but it's not. Like every other novel out there, it's flawed but that's ok because there are no perfect novels out there. In fact, I still read it to the latest chapter because, no matter how hard it was to read due to the barrage of grammatical errors - or the fast pacing of the story - it was a unique world that I liked and would want to read more of. The characters are fascinating (other than the ML, he's a di*k who's possessive over a girl he pushed away and can sod off) and the world they inhabit are phenomenal.