Reviews of Immortal Bastard's Return

Interesting start 😊 Auron Pheonix is a great MC, love his attitude and character. The bird he frees is cute (don't wanna spoil it). world background is creative and the dialogue flows really well. keep up the great work author! 📚

A good story. It has a good flow to it, and is also reasonably fast paced which is nice. I like how well the protagonist is developed, there is a nice amount of backstory, and his motives and grievances are set out very clearly. It certainly helps the reader connect with them more. The writing is of good quality, though there is the occassional tense change of grammatical error, but its not generally enough to ruin the reading experince. The world building aspect is good, I like how its built up from the beginning, which gives you a really clear picture of what you are going into. I'd say there are a few times when reading I thought: is that part necessary? Or maybe would have liked to see a bit more emphasis on certain events, but all in all, nice work.

Writing quality 4: it's good enough to not mind the few grammatical issues. Stability of updates 5: there isn't much to read as of now, but it seems frequent enough. Story Development 5: Well paced. Character Design 5: MC start of really low in his mentally on a verge of a breakdown. It leaves place for a lot of development. Others seems fine for now. World Background 5: Seems huge enough for now. The story just started so there isn't much to say in matter of Story development, character design and world background. But I give 5 stars nonetheless because I think it'll get better. Good job so far.

An interesting take on isekai in that the main protagonists consciousness is transported into a different time. The Chapters I've read so far are well described, looking forward to more from the author

I only have one word for this novel, one word only. Are you curious about my one word too? Why so curious? Stop reading to find out my one word man. Omg, please stop being so curious. Curiosity will kill the cat, don't you know this. Fine, seeing how you're so desperate to know my one word. It's collection. What's collection? Obviously, it's adding this novel to your library fool.

the story is great.. though it's a little overly emotional in the first chapters, that does not seem to be the vibe author is going for in the later chapters. gets very much better from third chapter onwards.. will keep reading.

This is a fun read. Really like the idea of the fallible immortal protagonist who can still feel pain, and as a result must endure 500 years of torture and suffering before he is finally able to free himself from his predicament. Never thought being immortal could get you into such hardship haha. The story flows nicely and I am enjoying the numerous obstacles the protagonist finds himself facing on his quest to bring his mother back to life. I hope he finds success. The story is well-written with some colorful prose and vivid descriptions. Highly enjoyable.

A Good Read Apostle Of Death I love the pace of the story, the MC has common sense and he has the brain to know and admit his mistakes. It is relatable. I Hope he find the meaning of life As a Death Chosen One.