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Very nice. No grammatical errors that I can see. The prologue is very dense in facts, but that is very handy going on later in the story, as less has to be explained. I really like the concept for werewolves here, it's a rather unique take and certainly a nice change from the usual. Keep it up!
An interesting take!
A lovely piece if work! It's very heavy on imagery and description, which I am a big fan of. It really helps encapsulate each scene and the emotions of the characters really well. The prologue was really strong, and the other chapters are also really enjoyable to read to. There is a solid amount of wit and humour, and the whole story progresses in a very natural way. I love the characters, their dynamics, and overall, I'm really enjoying this story! Amazing work!
I feel like a foreshadowing is occurring
I am getting huge Erza Scarlet vibes
Beautiful work! I love how much detail thats put into all the characters! I feel like when I am reading, I really know there personalities, their emotions, their struggles. The author has a wonderfully descriptive style of writing, and doesnt shy away from giving backstories either, which is something I tend to see people do. I really enjoyed the plot, how fast paced it was, and overall the writing is superb.
I swear, if I ever find her boyfriend...
I hope she will be okay...
Thank you so much for the review! And granted, romance with gods and devils certainly falls into a particular category! But that's totally up to you, everyone has there own preferences after all! Once again, thank you, and happy writing and reading!
Alright! Here are my thoughts! By the first chapter, I was immediately hooked. The writing is descriptive, even poetic at times, and the author has such a great ability of representing a scene in such vivid detail, it's really immersive. I love the plot and the concept for this novel. It doesnt move too fast either, which makes it very enjoyable to read. The use of flashbacks helps to build up tensions, and overall, I must say this is very well crafted. Great work!
Bravo author! You have me hooked! I absolutely adore how meticulous and precise each scene was, with detailed description, metaphors, and a good expression of the characters emotions. I am enjoying the concepts for this book a lot, how everything seems to be filled with a sense of foreboding, and how well the story unravels as you progress. The dialogue is varied and dynamic, and overall I had a great time reading this!
Now this is a way to open a novel
As a huge fan of vampires, and having written a novel about vampires myself, I cannot express how great it was to see such a well crafted representation of them. I love the concept of this, vampire royalty, touches of forbidden love... oooh it's great! The descriptive elements are fantastic, it's really engaging, and the author has a wonderful ability to make the story really immersive. Not to mention there are some great character dynamics which really add another level to this novel. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this will go!
I'm really enjoying their relationship dynamics