The_Celestial_King
I love reading novels as a hobby. You will expect Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Supernatural, Mystery, Paranormal also romance if done well, as my favourite!
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I felt like I'm watching an Opera show with all the fancy words!
Me too. I felt like I'm watching opera!
Someone said this novel is being ruined by AI translation. Bring back human translation please!
No wonder they just sound gibberish and imagination is mess!
Thank you very much. Truthfully some of the things you said are correct especially about not fleshing out certain things to make them consistent and plausible. Though, I didn't feel it was fast-paced pace but now that I checked it was at some places, the reason was I wanted to finish with the continent and jum to the normal ones where most of the players are. However, I will devise a better pace in future chapters. I would like to clarify certain things too. 1. Seth Enoch body is hard to improve like other people because of that he focuses on art and others as that is the only thing that will aid him in the game. However, if you read far enough he was on his way to imbue a bloodline that he thinks will suit him and improve his physique. Well, I won't spoil whether he succeeds or not. 2. Another thing was, due to him becoming a fake chief and others he managed to gain Exertion Points attribute which allowed him to have a normal physique as long as he had Exertion Points. But without them, he was a thorough cripple. 3. During the class options, if you remember he was in a delusional state after escaping Red Valley and other dangers he was facing atop on that he was being forced to choose a class very fast in that situation. At that moment combat class would be a good choice but his body would not accept any kind of that class, the best was noble which he chose not because of combat but to oppose his real life status of commoner. 4. A spoiler, a mage-like class is good for him but he can't learn Spell the usual way like using a skill book and others. Only through Arcane which was an intense study of spells and conjuring them but that will take time which he doesn't have. 5. What his body can take was strange blessings the likes he was able to gain from Dragons due to Noble Class Quest and from Red Valley which came from Ancient Red Dragon. Anyway, thank you for the feedback it really helped a lot.
Didn't he need to stay for 60 days to harvest them. Or was it not?
Plot armor will protect him!
This is a lousy reason. A big plot hole just to justify their failure. The novel starts well but this just makes me want to drop it.
Just a moment ago Dr were saying there is no Resonance as that was a myth and now they were talking about Resonance as if it was common?
The dialogue has become worse!