Review Detail of Yoan_Roturier in Immortal Bastard's Return

Writing quality 4: it's good enough to not mind the few grammatical issues. Stability of updates 5: there isn't much to read as of now, but it seems frequent enough. Story Development 5: Well paced. Character Design 5: MC start of really low in his mentally on a verge of a breakdown. It leaves place for a lot of development. Others seems fine for now. World Background 5: Seems huge enough for now. The story just started so there isn't much to say in matter of Story development, character design and world background. But I give 5 stars nonetheless because I think it'll get better. Good job so far.