This is the genre I like. So, chances are I am going to be far more forgiving than those who don't like the genre. That being said, the book is good in it's own right. The language is smooth, the story flows neither too fast, nor to slow, it's a compelling read to the end.
The story is quite good, and of my favorite genre. I love it. If you like the isekai adventure stories, but craving something new, or some thing a little more detailed, try this story. It's awesome. Author! waiting for updates!
The concept is nice, the build up is nice, so is the title cover. however, the writing quality is too low. The goods things are the author does have an idea about writing, what's going to happen and what needs to happen. Only, the words and the associations used mess up the flow. This is not a big problem. With two more edits, all the problems will be solved. My advice is - use google docs. Auto corrects grammer, is pretty nice.
It's my favorite genre. So, you will probably only get praises from me. The story is little slow, key word being little. Instead, it makes up in description. I know the other stories of this genre read like profile books, but this one doesn.t It makes it all the more enticing. Well done author. I will find you again. [img=recommend]
your destiny head it's calling - your destiny HEED it's calling.
The book, the characters! I mean, I never even thought of this concept. How do brains even make up a being who is a sword chaser?! That's amazing. I loved this concept. Besides little mistakes or somethings, this was a fun ride cause the rider, aka me, is a maniac for action and adventure
It's a slow going sci-fi, more of the star trek genre than the super fast video gamey sci-fi's you see on webnovel. However, the writing quality is good, so, you can read it fast. Try it. It just might be your cup of tea.
Well, I like this genre. Mindless wish fulfilment and face slapping, with a hint of body comedy going on. This very much feels like a translated novel, if it isn't, then, author, you have done very well for your self. I think I found a keeper for my library. Keep updating!
The way it's written, the language is well-formed. The story is transmigration and the author really takes us to the fantasy world fast. The dialogues are well thought out, the characterization above all is splendid. Really well written. Keep it up. Try this story, you will definitely like it. I am looking forward for more.
Not sure whether this story is marked teen, but it's definitely in teen category, with how the emotions and story build up of the story goes. Author writes pretty well, setting is nice .. However, she misses out on some common norms. Double Quotes always start on a new line, no matter how small. This is not a big deal, because on webnovel, you can edit and update... there are stray punctuation marks, such as double quotes, full stops, and occassional typos. obviously, these are minor, but at some point you need to review and fix. All in all, it's a good read. Try it, It just might be your cup of tea.
Great start to a great story. I like the author's style and the atmosphere that is created in the episodes. Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.
It is never a good idea to change the spellings of known words to sound fancy. Such idiosyncrasies are barely forgiven even for top authors, much less a newbie. But then, I can understand the urge to do such things.. these anagrams sound and feel grand in one's own mind. Unfortunately, I give up at three such words. caves & vaecs? Thankfully, author does not over do this, and the writing quality is excellent. if not for the easy reading, and the fast pace of the story, over all brilliant quality, I would not continue. However, the writing quality is good, so I did read .. to the end. Well done. it's worth a read.
Lovable characters and very lifelike emotions were displayed! I like the story so far and it was very engaging! With hot ahem scenes that were very suitable for research purposes...hehe (@_@). The writing quality was excellent and thus I gave you 5 stars! Kudos and I can't wait to see it reach a million views! Well done.
Overall, it's an engaging story. The tenses are a bit mixed up, but that does not take away from the overall understanding of the story. I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Try it, It just might be your cup of tea.
Author is too descriptive on the narration which is good. Its emotionally written. A good story is having good narration and well-written emotion of the characters, this book is great! If you are a reader that is into werewolves & vampires, fairies.. read this book ! : ))