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Fixed. Thank you 😊
Changed, thank you. I don't want to confuse anyone 🥰
Thanks 🥰 I have updated it now.
Amazing start to what I can only imagine to be an epic love story! Milo and Rachel's interactions are both funny and cute. Can't wait to read more! 🥰
Thanks for reading 🥰
Great start author! Story flows naturally and the world background is creatively explained. The chapters are short but I don't mind that as its an easy read. A few typos but nothing that hinders the readers ability of enjoying your novel. keep up the hard work author!
Great start author! The MC kicks off this story which is both unique and intriguing. The system is creatively portrayed and unique at the same time. Really enjoyable read and the story flows easily. Keep up the great work author!
Interesting backstory of the MC I love how ur novel is kicked off with that. The system is innovative and I really enjoyed reading about it. The beasts are my favourite, you have described them and the world back ground very creatively. Keep up the hard work author!