Reviews of Holy Necromancer: Rebirth of the Strongest Mage

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listen it certainly wasn't a masterpiece before but after recent events where Gabriel 'awakens' I feel like it just murdered the mc and all the development up until that point was just erased. like the author woke up and decided to hit a fast forward button, it's disappointing because it was entertaining to see Gabriel's journey but now it's just a different character entirely and the dual elements thing is just a nothing burger

Writing quality = 3 Story = 3 Characters = 3 Final classification = 3.6 - There are many times that the author makes many lines to describe the scenario, which makes the story unnecessarily long. - Social interaction between the characters is grade 4, because in many chapters the conversations become artificial. - There are some inconsistencies such as, for example, killing a guard at the city gate in broad daylight and no one noticing.

SPOILERS I've read up to 620 and I feel like I'm just being trolled by the author at this point. The author just decides to destroy the world that Gabriel/Karyk is from for absolutely no reason. Also whenever Gabriel/Karyk decides to kill or betray someone, it just miraculously happens that they had ulterior motives all along.

You can't be enemy of the world and expect to have a good ending without killing off everyone, when a novels start with the prompt of enemy of the world that means no matter what they do they will always be hunted they can never have a family and it can take up to 400 chapters before things get better or even a glimmer of hope for a happy ending appears if at all, read the first 10 chapters I can't go on seen to many like this.

stupid people , dumb people with 0 iq or maybe an author who just want to write dumb characters because it's the easy way , so i as the reader took the easy way too finish chapter 7 and dropped

I would love to start this book however this would be my second book by this author and neither of them are completed he just stopped updating Amazing stories that I don't mind paying for until I don't get an ending very disappointing 😒

Overall score = 3 Writing quality = 3 Story = 3 Characters = 3 World Background = 3 To be honest I would've given the "world background" and "story development" a 4, but I felt that it was quite forced...? sometimes, for me, it just doesn't make sense. The dialogue also feels somewhat wrong if I say so myself, but your grammar is pretty good so 3. you may think this is quite low, but this is actually one of the good novels I've read here in this site. Everytime I read novels, I always quit at the start if it's so bad. but here it didn't make me leave so its ok. This would be a good novel to past time.

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For warning everything ahead is text to speech so there will be errors. Honestly I don't really know how to feel about this story. There's so much good about it. That even the bad parts in my opinion, are easy to glass over. But one of the hardest things for me about the story. Is that the further you get in the story? The more you realize that there is more than one main character and well, that's not bad. Sometimes it gets a bit frustrating since the author likes to split the perspectives from following one character and following another character. Massive spoiler add when gabriel and karyks Homeworld are destroyed neither of them are connected with each other so they no longer can talk to each other. And while there isn't a bad thing. The bad part is that they get separated into 2. Totally different story pads. And they don't even talk to each other about it. Sometimes because they can't, and that wouldn't be bad in itself. If we didn't hear them, Talk to each other for 200 plus Chapters, and you Know that it's going in a Bad direction for both of them. The authors literally setting them up to go from being a person whose soul was essentially split in 2 by with different personalities. If that makes sense to 2 people who are going to be at each other's throats, because they'll have not only differing opinions but different outlooks on. How the world should proceed. And while that wouldn't be a bad thing, I'm just saying that after 200 plus chapters of the suspense of wondering, when they're finally gonna talk to each other, or when they're finally gonna meet up, it drags onto a point where I just can't be bothered. Anymor and that's no fault of the author it's probably a fault of my own simply because I want them to talk immediately. I want the climax to happened right away, but that's because the author keeps laying down points in the story where the climax can happen at any time, but then it just passes away and it gets really annoying..

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The mc knows no limit to his Stupidity he is naive. But the story is quite good

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It was actually quite good, but the MC lost all of his braincells as soon as he entered the Academy. At first I didn’t mind it as it could just be character development, but it just got worse and worse. He just kept ‘forgetting’ things, final straw was when he used his real name, instead of his fake name for when he was climbing the tower, then he tries to bind the Staff Of Darkness to himself, did he really not thing the Book of darkness wouldn’t have a failsafe for anything like that? So disappointing, he really did just become dumber and dumber, why did you do me like this Author.

It’s alright. I’ve read until the last chapter, it’s an okay distraction. Don’t go in expecting any kind of necromancing.

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I really like the overarching story and the world building but there are so many plot holes it's driving me nuts. It feels like the author provides us with some information and then completely forgets what he had mentioned before and starts writing something else. The MC does alot of extremely dumb thing which should get him killed but comes out with rewards instead cause of the thick polt armor he's wearing. The author has a hard time remembering how long ago something happened in the story which he himself mentioned earlier, especially during the Tower of trials arc. Review what you write or get an editor or something. The story has plot holes and the author over explains the MC's thought process which makes the MC seem dumber then he already is. I can even give you some examples if you want but they will contain spoilers.

early chapters mc be like this is a life lesson to never help anyone out and only care for my self. 30 chapters mc finds a boy getting beat up and he was like he reminds me of my self i have to help him🤮 this scene made me drop it reason i read antihero mc is cause id want someone who goes around helping randos its too bad cause its been some time since i liked a heroine in a story thats not harem