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Review Detail of Blazing_Kirin in Holy Necromancer: Rebirth of the Strongest Mage

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I really like the overarching story and the world building but there are so many plot holes it's driving me nuts. It feels like the author provides us with some information and then completely forgets what he had mentioned before and starts writing something else. The MC does alot of extremely dumb thing which should get him killed but comes out with rewards instead cause of the thick polt armor he's wearing. The author has a hard time remembering how long ago something happened in the story which he himself mentioned earlier, especially during the Tower of trials arc. Review what you write or get an editor or something. The story has plot holes and the author over explains the MC's thought process which makes the MC seem dumber then he already is. I can even give you some examples if you want but they will contain spoilers.

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