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This story is extremely disappointing I'm 1,300 chapters in just because I'm too stubborn to give up. Most of this story is just a mishmash of plot holes and new wives added to the harem. Whenever a girl meets William shes almost instantly enamored and next thing you know there's like 4 chapters dedicated to a bedroom scene.
It's weird that it says 14 chapters a week when there isn't even 1 chapter a week. Pretty sure the author stopped writing.
SPOILERS I've read up to 620 and I feel like I'm just being trolled by the author at this point. The author just decides to destroy the world that Gabriel/Karyk is from for absolutely no reason. Also whenever Gabriel/Karyk decides to kill or betray someone, it just miraculously happens that they had ulterior motives all along.
There's so many inconsistencies chapter to chapter that I wonder if the author even remembers what they've written in previous chapters. Also a lot of chapters are redundant where nothing new happens just a bunch of fluff.