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eqwy1yrCommented...all?
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what? thats it for his backstory??
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anyways, jokes aside. I hate it when novels do this. I always felt like I was reading a book for children
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she's BOOM!
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okay good. I thought he would.
'Sigh! Forget it! I should not force such a sweet girl as an outlet of my lust. ' Max changed his mind after seeing her innocent face tremble. - eqwy1yrCommented
yep. scum
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where is the backstory where she was saved by this young master when she was little and because of that, she dedicated her life to her. pretty weird to not have it
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paradise? do you know how hard it is to provide the needs of your family to live comfortably? just imagine having multiple kids and wives. the horror
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bruh. I expected like a "What the f***" reaction but ok im dissapointed.
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ikr.
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Overall score = 3 Writing quality = 3 Story = 3 Characters = 3 World Background = 3 To be honest I would've given the "world background" and "story development" a 4, but I felt that it was quite forced...? sometimes, for me, it just doesn't make sense. The dialogue also feels somewhat wrong if I say so myself, but your grammar is pretty good so 3. you may think this is quite low, but this is actually one of the good novels I've read here in this site. Everytime I read novels, I always quit at the start if it's so bad. but here it didn't make me leave so its ok. This would be a good novel to past time.
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hotel?
"I think it's time we take our leave. We also need to look for a hotel. We will see you at the auction." Elora stood up gracefully before she left. - eqwy1yrCommentedCh 33 Chapter 33: Things falling apart?
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tru
She had heard the stories about Lambard. He was a really chill person who didn't care about many things, but when he got angry, he didn't care how influential one was. As long as he was in the city, he was no less than a demigod. He had even gone against the Head of Church of Light last time without a single care in the world, and he still managed to survive. - eqwy1yrCommentedA powerful aura acted up on Gabriel, which placed pressure on his body to force him to his knees. "Apologize this instant!"
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how did she even guessed that they were peasants? they are literally Lambart's guest. This Ruyi girl must be dumb asf
It didn't matter if Elora didn't meet the two commoners like them properly, but when they were introduced, how dare these peasants ignore the one who was selected by the Goddess of Water herself?! - eqwy1yrReplied to Cyclops1i
ikr. im as confused as you are
"He can't come," Lira chimed in. "She might not be able to harm you in this place, but it's not the same for Gabriel. She can kill him if she realizes who he is, and I'm sure his aura will give away his identity." - eqwy1yrCommented
how would you know?
"Seven days should be enough." Gabriel took the offer. He wore the ring on the middle finger of his right hand, right beside the black ring on his ring finger.