Mitico
I'm a guy that always dreams incredible complex stories, and then forgets about them after 3 chapters.
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Mitico3mthPostedThis is pure , unadulterated nonsense, whoever wrote this should feel sad. I gave up at chapter 4. It feels as if a chinese author wrote a chinese mc, then decided that the mc is from the west, even though everything is still chinese. Plot makes little to no sense, the style is garbage and I’m constantly wondering what is going on.
detailLord Of The World: I Become The Lord Of The Desert From The StartSci-fi · Carp Blowing Bubbles- Mitico8mthReplied to RosemainBeckett
Agreed. Either you do what you can to reintegrate a person, or you root out the problem definetly, half measures just lead to more problems.
As for non-violent crime, it would entirely depend on the crime that had been committed. For example, if one were to be convicted of theft, they would lose the hand they used to steal the item. Others included imprisonment for a limited duration, assuming they survived the backbreaking work given to prisoners. They would either fear going back to such a hell or become a repeat offender, thus adding to their three strikes. - Mitico9mthReplied to Sachin_AAACh 42 Side story: The explorers 2
- Mitico9mthReplied to Haplo484
It would have actually been quite a twist, and it’s not like I can’t use it…
Beneath the great shadow of the Orokin Mountain Range, the group of explorers stood poised to venture into the unknown. Their objective lay in the uncharted lands beyond the colossal peaks, a promise of discovery and potential prosperity. The mountain's gnarled heights stood like jagged teeth against the sky, their snow-capped peaks glimmering in the early morning sun as if smiling a cold, foreboding welcome. - Mitico9mthReplied to Haplo484
That’s actually a good point. He does have the ability to burrow underground to make a shelter for himself and the group, so that might have been a last moment solution.
The enormous boulder, accelerated by air magic and strengthened by earth magic hurled down at terminal speed, a deadly projectile guided by Ijekiel's will. The impact was imminent, and the adventurers braced themselves, watching as their sorcerer made his descent, a blazing comet racing towards the heart of the stone monstrosity. - Mitico9mthReplied to Sachin_AAACh 42 Side story: The explorers 2
- Mitico10mthReplied to Sachin_AAACh 42 Side story: The explorers 2
- Mitico10mthReplied to Thorai
should i put it at the end of waserschein or ledir?
Ledir Waserschein, also called the Buried Viper, was especially known to Roderick as the man who caused Milovich and Ilira's death. - Mitico10mthReplied to Thorai"I could listen to you talk about an old brick for hours." He replied with a smile and a bow.
- Mitico10mthReplied to Thorai
Hahahahahahahahhahaha
Healing magic had its limits too, if too long time passed before treatment, Kael might never recover full use of the limb, and for an assassin that would be the end of his life. - Mitico10mthReplied to Ijekiel_Pendragon
Thank you
Thane swiftly lunged forward, his movements precise and agile, as a wave of earth magic surged from his hand. The ground beneath the dummy shook, and within moments, a pillar of earth erupted, lifting it off its feet. - Mitico10mthReplied to Ijekiel_Pendragon
Yeah actually, now you are tempting me to create an avatar like character, maybe called Ijekiel ;)
Thane swiftly lunged forward, his movements precise and agile, as a wave of earth magic surged from his hand. The ground beneath the dummy shook, and within moments, a pillar of earth erupted, lifting it off its feet. - Mitico10mthReplied to Ijekiel_Pendragon
Hahahahaaha, that's a nice found.
She carefully picked a potted Firebloom flower and held it up for the students to see, the petals dancing like tiny flames. "The Firebloom flower thrives in warm climates and requires constant exposure to sunlight. As you can see, the petals appear to flicker like fire, ergo, the name." - Mitico10mthReplied to BlkM5k
How do you know? Roderick just arrived in the world with incomplete memories and knows little about the world and what's in it. Having the literal pillars that are supporting him kept in the dark would cause more harm than good in my opinion. It's not like he told everyone in the school. Also, it's not bad writing just because it's not what you would have done.
Ch 6 Chapter 6: The Magical Academy System - Mitico10mthReplied to BlkM5k
They saw him absorb the system in his chest, and having a small group of people know what's going on is paramount for earning trust and maximizing the usefulness of the system. This is not a novel where the mc can do whatever and people will look in amazement, secrets cause rifts in people and tend to attract a lot of prying eyes. Having some people he shares it with can mitigate the problem.
- Mitico10mthReplied to Sachin_AAACh 35 Side Story: The Alchemist 2
- Mitico10mthReplied to Ijekiel_Pendragon
I imagined him with a more squarish jaw, but the art is still beautiful! Is it yours.
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