Reviews of Gravity Falls: The Lord of Darkness

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dude update plz don't drop just from the summary it's gonna be good so update plz my dude ..................................................plz

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Honestly, it’s not a terrible Gravity Falls (fanfic), however there was a lot of mistakes and confusing things that didn’t make sense. The start was pretty good, but soon after that it started to get a bit bad.

It is very original, on this page I had never come across something from Gravity Falls, it is an original story of a darker Dipper that is more attached to the more supernatural side of the series, good job, work on the interaction between characters and on Dipper's thoughts.

I really like this fanfic so far and I haven't found many gravity fall fanfics that I liked so this is really new to me. sure there are spelling mistakes but the story makes up for it 10 folds in my opinion, overall really enjoying the fic.

es una buena historia además el tiempo de publicación a mejorado reciente mente al igual que la calidad de la escritura pero pienso que le falta un poco mas de desarrollo a los demás personajes

I like the story so far but if you could use something to help with spelling mistakes it would make it better cc"ffff did hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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This story has great potential. The characters are written well and the grammee is fantastic. The issue is that the author has restarted this fic 2 (3? I might have missed a restart) times now. They can't seem to decide if it is good enough or not and because of that I feel that this story will eventually be dropped. I would love to see this fic flourish, I just feel that, due to the authors constant rewriting, it will never get the chance.

Nice gravity falls novel, finally not some 5 year old making things happen just for the sake of making the character op and I like hoe the Mc seems smart and your describing appearances like Mabel and his shirts

I love this adaptation of the show so much. please continue I love how you introduced magic into the story,.....................................................

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Truth be told this is an amazing story, the beginning with its terrible grammar may be a turn off for some but after those are edited I believe this would get in the top 100 on webnovel

Love gravity falls and i love this take on it if you are a fan of the series you would like this i love dipper's character in this and the magic and stuff i just hope this story wouldn't get dropped

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Hey man i haven't read this but i already is good because of the other novel you wrote and can you continue it(jeff scp) and i just i wanna say there's not alot of novels(your original works) like this so good creativity.

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