Truth be told this is an amazing story, the beginning with its terrible grammar may be a turn off for some but after those are edited I believe this would get in the top 100 on webnovel
Thank you very much I guess I could fix up those chapters up, so how many chapters need to be edited I know roughly the first five or four need to be edited not sure beyond that if you want you could tell me and I'll edit them and afterwards I'll get back to updating.