Review Detail of Online_Me in Gravity Falls: The Lord of Darkness

Item: Gravity Falls: The Lord of Darkness
Rating: 3.2

Review detail

Online_MeLv42yrOnline_Me

This story has great potential. The characters are written well and the grammee is fantastic. The issue is that the author has restarted this fic 2 (3? I might have missed a restart) times now. They can't seem to decide if it is good enough or not and because of that I feel that this story will eventually be dropped. I would love to see this fic flourish, I just feel that, due to the authors constant rewriting, it will never get the chance.

Gravity Falls: The Lord of Darkness

deadly_orange

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deadly_orangeAuthordeadly_orange

To be fair the first time I rushed things, second time it wasn't really a proper rewrite it was a rewording as far as I'm concerned and this one is the first actual rewrite. If you want to be technical I've rewritten this story twice never fully rewritten. The original version had 70 chapters and yes I really didn't think the other two versions were good enough

2yr

deadly_orangeAuthordeadly_orange

Oh and secondly still haven't dropped my original fanfic after rewriting it ten times so I doubt I'll drop this at most ny stories get paused temporarily and I come back to them at a later date. it's happened every time over the span of 3 or 4 years I've been writing.

2yr