Asura160
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I love to read and want to someday write my own story.
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Asura16012hReplied to Shadow_D_Monarch3I think she was already pregnant when she fell and only the second child is from the bleu pole star
"Yue Wuya, come with me. I'll take you to your—ugh, to Yue Wugou's daughter."- Asura16013hCommented
Will you stop in the same chapter the original story stopped or will you continue it
// We are only three chapters away from concluding this arc. - Asura16017hCommented"Uh well…nothing much" M'gann replied, blushing brightly as she remembered what she was doing earlier. Gwen raised an eyebrow at this, knowing that the girl was very obviously lying.
- Asura1606dCommented"You sent a group of ruffians to my sect, behaving as if you owned the place," Lucifer continued, his tone dripping with disdain. "Demanding my surrender without even attempting negotiations. Such disrespect cannot go unpunished."
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If you went with this at least erase the above paragraphs
As Lucifer began to speak, they were abruptly pulled back to reality. "I thought you were seeking the man who killed your son," he began, his voice cutting through the tense silence. "Well, I am him. I go by the alias Tang Luo, and I'm here to finish what I started." - Asura1607dCommented
this is a repeat
"I was wondering when those people from the Song Clan would arrive," remarked Lucifer, his voice devoid of anxiety or nervousness. His calm demeanor surprised Fang Hua, considering he was the cause of everything. He had killed Song Jing, making himself the primary target of the Song Clan's vengeance. Yet, instead of fear, he seemed almost anticipatory of their arrival. Fang Hua couldn't help but wonder about the true nature of the boy standing before her. - Asura16010dCommentedEven if the Ministry of Magic found him in the complicated London sewers, or if the Transfiguration on him wore off and he returned to his original form, he would only think of himself as a true toad.
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Only if it's yuri
She would need to do all sorts of obscene things to get points, but she would also need the admiration of the people to unlock the upgrades. - Asura16011dCommentedHer younger sister's words did nothing to pacify Fleur's intensity, "You don't speak for yourself anymore, Gabby! You have been seduced! Hypnotized! Led astray! Your mind is not your own! He already tries to control you! It-… It should have been me!"
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You say it's a pain about everything you write.
Sorry about the quality, but I sorta realized that Shadowhunters is..a pain in the ass to write, so I decided to do a timeskip past the events that Talia wouldn't really change or do anything about, as she wants canon to remain slightly, so that she can get the wish from Raizel. - Asura16013dCommentedCh 80 sorry guys
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A slave mark and with time she will come to like him and being his slave and such Stockholm syndrome and makes for some kinky talk in bed
So, I want to ask. How do you think the story could progress from here (mainly the Shan Qing Luo part and how to get close to her, and how to have her help in dealing with Yang Bai). - Asura16015dCommented
Have him brand her with a slave mark or something and make her his servant/dual cultivation partner
Now, Shan Qing Luo has been captured and Mc will talk to her. (I'm stuck on that part mostly) and how the story would progress to end the starting world. - Asura16017dReplied to Gamal_HanyCh 3 Chapter 3: Rebirth? Transmigration?
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Harry Potter: Ero World
Does anyone know of any good obscene stories, I'm not finding anything interesting lately. - Asura16021dCommented
But where is Tonks?
Regarding the Smut content, The 18+ content would increase as it would take up a little more of the story! Upcoming characters include Narcissa Malfoy and Pansy Parkinson, followed by Minerva and then Susan! - Asura16021dCommented
Minerva
Regarding the Smut content, The 18+ content would increase as it would take up a little more of the story! Upcoming characters include Narcissa Malfoy and Pansy Parkinson, followed by Minerva and then Susan! - Asura16022dCommented
Tell that to cultivators with how much talent is needed to grasp some martial arts and Dao's and stuff
Mages are not like warriors, who engage in straightforward, exhilarating battles that don't require much thought. A mage's battles are all about calculations, and a mage's strength comes from knowledge. - Asura16022dCommented
Wonder Woman for one-night stand or friend with benefits
Should I make Wonder Woman a love interest for Gwen? Or no? She's hot, but sorta overdone. I wanna give it to more underappreciated characters, like Artemis, M'gann, and them. Speaking of M'gann, I'm pretty sure she's going to be in the harem, as she's cute. I'll change around the whole real form thing into something a bit different. - Asura16022dCommentedThe smile on the Pirate King's face seemed terribly ominous... undoubtedly, if Sengoku and Garp were present and saw this familiar smile, they would warn everyone nearby to flee as quickly as possible.detailCreating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH