Nice gravity falls novel, finally not some 5 year old making things happen just for the sake of making the character op and I like hoe the Mc seems smart and your describing appearances like Mabel and his shirts
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LIKEYeah I like describing appearances and characters various outfits. And I tend to make my characters somewhat intelligent. Also I really dislike giving powers for free I fee like it diminishes how meaningful the moments are or they're just drivel if you just give power ups that aren't earned but that's my two cents and thank you for review, a d thank you for telling me what you likem