Review Detail of Jccr in Gravity Falls: The Lord of Darkness
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It is very original, on this page I had never come across something from Gravity Falls, it is an original story of a darker Dipper that is more attached to the more supernatural side of the series, good job, work on the interaction between characters and on Dipper's thoughts.
Gravity Falls: The Lord of Darkness
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thank you for the feed back and I surely will I'm about to play some games and wake up amd I'll write the next chapter, I've always liked the supernatural part of gravity falls and I've had the idea why not make dipper more a part of the supernatural. Anyways I appreciate the review and feed back I promise there will be more interactions in a few chapters and there definitely will once he goes to gravity falls.
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deadly_orange:thank you for the feed back and I surely will I'm about to play some games and wake up amd I'll write the next chapter, I've always liked the supernatural part of gravity falls and I've had the idea why not make dipper more a part of the supernatural. Anyways I appreciate the review and feed back I promise there will be more interactions in a few chapters and there definitely will once he goes to gravity falls.
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deadly_orange:Yes my characters are supposed to be semi realistic and most people want romance in they're life