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GoT: Break the Wheel

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Read GoT: Break the Wheel fanfiction written by the author Pretending_Author on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Book&Literature fanfic stories, covering action, romance, adventure, r18, magic. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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The Main Character is a Male Targaryen who is named Eragon Targaryen, he is Daenerys Targaryen's twin brother. This is tagged Yuri because girls in his harem will get intimate during sex with the MC and people cry when they aren't warned. (people also seem to cry when they don't instantly see Yuri sex if it's tagged Yuri, you can't make people happy.) This is AU - This is an Alternate Universe of George's world. Expect people and things to be entirely different because of small changes butterflying out. Alternate Universe! Like how The entire first 25 chapters is a 'Time skip' until Eragon is 14 years old. So the first 25 chapters are just random POVs of others and him to build up the world and show changes. Instead of just saying "he was born and 14 years passed." I wrote out the 14 years in a 'fast' way and showed some character build-up for different people. Now that the easily triggered have been warned I can let you know more about the story. World exploration and conquest will be a big theme in this over the many chapters it will eventually be. So far he hasn't gotten around all that much but it's only chapter 70 out of like at least 1000 if I estimate it right. And that might be shorting it quite a bit as I will be making this a very long fan fic. Dragons are in this, new ones. Magic will be touched quite a bit, nothing like altering reality but definitely a cool flaming sword. I like to think I build up the characters pretty well and have them stick to their personalities pretty well. I said it before but world exploration and diving into the lore of new places are one of the things I look forward to the most so it's a pretty big part. I don't know what else, try it if the world of ASOIAF interest you, if it doesn't then this wont be something you like in the slightest.

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Fifteen disciples. They were useless in the Academy of Magic and Witch-hunting. .... An excerpt from the chapter 91 The Third Son of the Magic Master The students after the lecture started leaving. Crag was looking toward Lui, he was observing him as usual. For him, Lui was only the third son of the Magic Master. Crag was forced to betray the third son of the Magic Master from his study, it was the only wish of his father. But deep down in his heart, he always thought that why his father was using an underhanded scheme to destroy the Magic Master. So it was a literal struggle of his mind and heart to carry every day and still follow the advice of his father He still remember when he was struggling to use magic and get out of water back then. He saw Lui also struggling. When his eyes fell on Crag, he forgot his own struggle and tried hard to force him out of the water, it was simply suffocating to think that all these years, he worked to follow the advice of his father and betrayed Lui, his friend, and Lui on the other hand was still saving him despite knowing that he himself was dying. This simply shaken his conscience. He was keeping eyes at all other friends and he knew most of them were disloyal toward him and they were only tagging along with him because someone said them to do this. Only two or three were sincere. Most of the elders of the sect were aware that Lui was the one who would turn the whole scenario upside down when the disloyal magic elders would revolt against the sect master in the open war. For several years, they keep following their plans and when the time came and they feared that he might awake the special magic light at reaching the age of twenty five, the planned how to kill him. Crag happened to hear all this. ..... An excerpt from chapter 92 to understand the characters and their backgrounds: Renren and Raozuo has different plans in their heads, the others were thinking more about competition and study. Everyone was muddled in their separate thoughts, their separate concerns. They would complete the task no matter if they took some more time. Mostly belong to the families who were planning to break a war for the sect master and they trained their sharp minded kids to follow their plans. Lippizen was an orphan raised by the sect master so he ultimately joined Lui’s group. Ni Chen was son of the good old friend and Lei Mei was out of question, a good soul who follow Lui no matter if he admire any other girl. The others always met him with masked faces, and succeeded in hiding their true motives. ..... An excerpt from the chapter 94 to hint the plot: Lui was shocked. "I said I was never your friend, I was told to stay around you," Crag repeated his words by adding more alarming revelation. His father and the other enemies were planning for the war and for killing the third son of the sect master, could it possible that they send someone to kill them on that day? Was it possible that his father thought to sacrifice his own son too to not get blamed? Lui noticed that Crag turned silent for some time. "Crag what are you saying?" He finally gathered few simplest words to speak out. "I am telling truth, I always pretended to be your friend while actually my father sent me to stop you from learning higher levels of magic," Crag spoke ralaxed, he has nothing to regret anymore. He was blurting out what was brewing in his heart and mind. "My father though worked for sect master but he always bore grudge against him and he was planning to break a war against sect master and his loyals," Crag related. This was something Lui never expected in his worst nightmares even. Lui wanted to slap this Crag for betraying him all these years but compared to Rim, he was lot better, at least he did not backstab in this world. ..... Waiting for my editor to show up Your author here.

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Kelvin_Ade
Kelvin_AdeLv4Kelvin_Ade

what can I say the story is awesome and each individual character's has depth in it, the world building was so on point that you can feel the author passion resonate in each chapter it is a most read for serious Game of thrones fan

Volotko
VolotkoLv4Volotko

Very good story. Interesting development of the world. The pace of storytelling is like i prefer, whithout rushing and with enough details. Please, keep up the good work.

DaoistZack
DaoistZackLv2DaoistZack

This is a really good AU of Martin's Planetos. It is well-written, the development is interesting, and the characters are like-able. The MC is a chill dude, which makes the story nice to read. He isn't some edgy murder hobo, thankfully, and the harem idea is well-executed - especially if one looks at it from the perspective of someone who has no idea of the morals of the late 19th century and onwards.

Kw0z
Kw0zLv14Kw0z

Thought I would warn everyone that the harem members get with each other. It’s just self-justified NTR for the cucks.

NowGoWithTheFlow
NowGoWithTheFlowLv14NowGoWithTheFlow

To be honest I was confused the whole time. I read around 10 chapters and watch the movies so I should know a lot but still got confused. Who's the MC because I don't know. Author shifts the perspective to much that you don't know who's who. It's basically a time chart with only important events for each year. I wanted to give a lower score but I couldn't because I didn't know how to score this. Also author when does the book start?

Amelion
AmelionLv4Amelion

this story is very confusing, in my opinion writing this fanfic is very messy, you also write too much pov of each character without you focusing on mc

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4Bob_Uchiha_XD

The name of the protagonist and the other characters is confusing, added to the poor quality of the writing, the story is too confusing, which gives headaches when trying to understand and order it. It may not be consistent with the social environment, but it would be preferable for the protagonist to be called Bob, Max, Alex, Carlos, Manuel, Miguel, Pepito... Also, the point of view (POV) changes in this story are another reason why it's confusing, they're poorly done. You could dedicate an entire chapter to the POV of the other characters, but don't combine 2 or more POV in a single chapter. Finally, it is not known exactly at what moment a character is speaking or thinking, nor at what moment the characters start or end the dialogue.

Mr_hypocrite
Mr_hypocriteLv4Mr_hypocrite

So confusing, you can write it off as normal, but again it's your choice. I didn't enjoy it even though I tried my best. You wanted to create something extraordinary but now it is totally a mess , I wish the writing style of this novel was normal. I'm giving it 2 stars because I feel like I wasted my time here

Targas
TargasLv2Targas

Reveal spoiler

Joseph_Dimacayo
Joseph_DimacayoLv1Joseph_Dimacayo

As expected, harem is really not my cup of tea. Also, what happened to sticking to their personalities? Lyanna and Ashara dayne? Fr? Still, good luck to your fanfic and I hope you'll write another one which is not a harem, or even romance.

tyr12345
tyr12345Lv4tyr12345

for those who want to know: story development 2 the rest 4 the beginnin of the story is quite boring and there are many oc characters. after about 20 to 30 chapters the story gets better and is quite enjoyable. From chapter 130 onwards the story development is taking a turn for the worse. The mc overcomes his main antagonists off without a struggle. The blackfires were established as a bigger enemy with the backing of the golden company. They were brought down by some assasin and then they were just integrated with the mc. Viserys had the potential to be this character in the family of the mc, that would betray him and give the mc problems by being jealous, … But then he just said, that his canon behaviour was just an act and he is fully ok with being cucked by the mc. In the end the mc gets all the women, that the author wants him to have and the story is being developed in such a way, that the mc has no problems. Overall that makes the story boring in the later stages and unsatisfying

Demon_King_Diabl0
Demon_King_Diabl0Lv1Demon_King_Diabl0

So far this is a great story can't wait to see where you take it and how it will play into the original lore of Game of Thrones anyway just writing to say that i have fallen in love with this story so far so just keep doing what you are doing cause its fantastic.

VersusLily
VersusLilyLv14VersusLily

Tempted to read due to your other Novel that I love.

Rubi_Stone
Rubi_StoneLv1Rubi_Stone

Yeah, pretending to be an author. Such a mess in just first few chapters, that you understand how much shame this novelists have nowadays. Lots of stupid woman running amok all over westeros, cause an idiot can't decide on his hormonal stupidness

Mastersun
MastersunLv1Mastersun

all the relationships between the characters seem strained and clumsy......................................................................................................................

cheelzy
cheelzyLv4cheelzy

BEWARE FOR WEBNOVELS STEALING OUR HARD EARNED POINTS!! POINTS NOW HAVE A EXPIRATION!!

Stieborn
StiebornLv4Stieborn

Why is this in the yuri tag section 🙂...

arno00
arno00Lv4arno00

so far it's pretty good [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]

RomuloTargaryen
RomuloTargaryenLv2RomuloTargaryen

Historia interessante,me lembra muito dos livros, por exemplo a relação dele com a Daneyers que me faz crer que provavalemente e espero ks sejam um casal. O cenário do PoV é interessante dá para ter uma ideia de quão ruim e serve como ampulheta para ver quando a desgraça acontecer,até agora achei as relações bem trabalhadas junto a uma escrita fluida considero uma ótima história e espero ansiosamente que continue. Um feliz ano novo ao autor \^¬^/

Kilowann
KilowannLv4Kilowann

high quality work. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍🏻

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