VersusLily

This has HUGE potential, I really hope you continue writing more chapters. For those wondering if this is worth the read. Its 1000% worth. Im honestly tired of just seeing garbage translated pokemon fics or Ai, this is a genuine pokemon fic.

I've really enjoyed reading this in one go, but I do have some complaints. Most chapters feel like its on the verge of something happening, but then it doesnt; it as if its a point in the story or moment and then it skips to the conclusion. Its very confusing on how to explain it. Then my next small complaint is the characters ability. Its that weird in-between where the character is OP yet isn't at the same time. Especially with the system he has and the way his body was made, it doesnt really make sense to me how his body is weak. Especially with a body being made by Death. Other then those two small complaints on my end, I do think the story is interesting and look forward to more, however its a story I'll let build up more chapters rather than reading day to day.

I hope this arc doesnt last too long lol

I see you heavily edited this page from the translation. thank you for doing it, when I originally read the raw i couldn't believe what was being written.

I speak American only brother.

fics not pics*

I've looked around for other ZZZ pics, but none of them looked good. This one however seems to be the best one by far. I wish there were more chapters.

This is not what pokemon is about. What's the point of a pokemon FF if the "main" character doesnt leave his house. Doesn't meet pokemon or interact with the characters? We see the pokemon world by a game within the pokemon world, so convoluted. And then as usual theres inaccurate information as usual, in the latest chapter Cynthia garchomp is written as a male, while in actual lore is a female. And for some reason everyone is a game streamer??? It just feels so out of character for that, except for Iono since that's what she really does. A pokemon story should be either about exploring the world or building bonds. Not creating games in a basement.

so what's the evidence? is she a lesbian lol?